Standing here
in pouring rain
waiting for you
As i shiver in
endless cold
waiting for you
Just the feeling
that you will
smile when you see
warms my soul
Hoping you will
walk with me
listening to you
endlessly
wish you never stop
words sweet words
from you
Every moment
every tear
every cry
wish i share all with you
Looking at you
filling every moment
in my pack of wishes
foolishly hoping
Will do all this
all that i know
Just can’t say
can’t say it better
Silent Expressions 
Ok nice poems.. all of them.. the simplicity makes them even more appealing .. I had read your poetry before but took a pause and imbibed them slowly this time. Going to vote for you now. I hope you win.. all the best .. : )
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thanks so much aria 🙂
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awesome!
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thanks Titaxy 🙂
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wonderful piece of poetry 🙂
Keep writing!!
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thank you chatterbox 🙂
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told you not to go after any girl who makes u wait in the pouring rain 🙂 she is not worth it…
lovely poem… u have written it in a very touching way…
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You never know ashi 😉 i cant change
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so swwet and romantic!!
innocent love is best emotion
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aww thanks shraddha, your comments are always special 🙂
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lovely…. 😉
take care..
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thanks so much @dreaming eyes 🙂
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But you have said it
You have said it so eloquently
and made my thoughts run asunder
But any girl that makes you wait in the pouring rain
and then thoughtlessly prattles
Is one smart aleck who leaves me in wonder.
Sorry about the above lines…I just couldn’t help it! 😀
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@ashley: hehe you are right, but i dont think i can change me 😉
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Awww… That was so sweet and romantic.. 🙂 Can’t say it better 😉
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thank you preposterous you have said it very well 😀 and sweet
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Very nice 🙂
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thanks so much megha 😀
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how beautifully it has been put across.. touched me…
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@soulmate: things from heart generally are good..glad you liked it 😉
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