aniruddha pathak


NaBloPoMo:Post 28:Courage and prayer

In poetry on July 28, 2009 at 17:05


You my angel

my guiding star

mentor forever

the sweetest heart

That hug that smile

that lovely tee

those crazy times

you took side with me

And now this time

I see you smile

through all the troubles

you say you’re fine

I pray this day

to keep you safe

to keep that smile

glowing on your face

  1. Oh! It is true…The more one writes the better one becomes at it…What more proof does one need than this post above…..

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    Choco 28 July 2009 at 5pm

  2. makes me go awww….

    nothing else to say 🙂 really…

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    Ashwathy 28 July 2009 at 7pm

  4. Nothing more divine than wishing for the safety and wellbeing of another. Beautiful!

    Keshi.

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    Keshi 29 July 2009 at 1am

  5. Beautiful…if a person need good wishes…i will do that fr him/her…and i appreciate your concern…great..

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    Priya 29 July 2009 at 4am

  6. so cute and lovely poem…touched somewhere in the heart. I will too pray for your frien:-)once again too good a post:-)

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    Manisha 29 July 2009 at 4am

  7. This is a beautiful prayer .. I instantly felt blessed by just reading it ones. My prayers for the friend..

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    tikulicious 29 July 2009 at 7am

  8. Whoever this is for i wish her all the happiness in this world!:)

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    prachi 29 July 2009 at 10am

  9. Such a sweet prayer for someone special.

    you write fine poetry. Difficult to be articulate in so little words. I try a lot of times and fail miserably.

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    aparna 29 July 2009 at 11am

    • I wish these prayers work aparna… give poetry a shot..and start with a topic close to heart..just dont worry about what anyone thinks about it..because that will be your style 🙂

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      aniruddha pathak 29 July 2009 at 11am

  10. Very heartfelt… She/he will be in my prayers too…

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    Prasi 29 July 2009 at 1pm

  11. Nice, touching poem. Specially the lines –
    I see you smile
    through all the troubles
    you say you’re fine

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    Megha 29 July 2009 at 2pm

  12. Lovely words!!beautifully expressed. 🙂

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    Ria 29 July 2009 at 3pm

  13. beautifully written!!

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    Ria 29 July 2009 at 3pm

  14. So VERY SWEET !!!

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    adisha 3 August 2009 at 3pm

  15. that’s sweet.. 🙂

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