aniruddha pathak

NaBloPoMo:Post 28:Courage and prayer

In poetry on July 28, 2009 at 17:05


You my angel

my guiding star

mentor forever

the sweetest heart

That hug that smile

that lovely tee

those crazy times

you took side with me

And now this time

I see you smile

through all the troubles

you say you’re fine

I pray this day

to keep you safe

to keep that smile

glowing on your face

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  1. Oh! It is true…The more one writes the better one becomes at it…What more proof does one need than this post above…..

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  2. makes me go awww….

    nothing else to say πŸ™‚ really…

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  3. Nothing more divine than wishing for the safety and wellbeing of another. Beautiful!

    Keshi.

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  4. Beautiful…if a person need good wishes…i will do that fr him/her…and i appreciate your concern…great..

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  5. so cute and lovely poem…touched somewhere in the heart. I will too pray for your frien:-)once again too good a post:-)

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  6. This is a beautiful prayer .. I instantly felt blessed by just reading it ones. My prayers for the friend..

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  7. Whoever this is for i wish her all the happiness in this world!:)

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  8. Such a sweet prayer for someone special.

    you write fine poetry. Difficult to be articulate in so little words. I try a lot of times and fail miserably.

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    • I wish these prayers work aparna… give poetry a shot..and start with a topic close to heart..just dont worry about what anyone thinks about it..because that will be your style πŸ™‚

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  9. Very heartfelt… She/he will be in my prayers too…

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  10. Nice, touching poem. Specially the lines –
    I see you smile
    through all the troubles
    you say you’re fine

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  11. Lovely words!!beautifully expressed. πŸ™‚

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  12. beautifully written!!

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  13. So VERY SWEET !!!

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  14. that’s sweet.. πŸ™‚

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