When the cold breeze of winter
troubles your heart in the centre
Coz of my poor thinking
that sends your mind itching
the little thing my heart expects
Please forgive meI know I’m crazy
for I’ve troubled you
without even thinking
that it’ll trouble me tooThe sea of guilt has poured
in every corner of my heart
and eyes are filled deep within
with tears that roll down fast
the little thing my heart expects
Please forgive meTime is moving fast
and confessions to be made
I’m a silly boy
messing thing in every phase
Shamelessly still
The only thing my heart expects
Please forgive me
aniruddha pathak
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This made me remember the bryan adams number 😀
But nicely done …..and lots of things left to interpretation…..deep poem indeed
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@Scribbling Gal: Of course it had to remind you of Bryan Adams i was listening to him night and day those days 😛
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You have a sad side too ….
this is amazing ani..
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@bebo: these are all old poems 🙂 written when in 11th std!! i was mad i guess 😉
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great expression..
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@fiveloaf welcome to the blog..i like the name 😉
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guilt can make you feel really deep and sometimes forgiveness is the only healing touch! nice poem!
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@scent of my heart: welcome to the blog 🙂 and thanks for a nice comment!..this is a very old poem and reminds me of how i have moved on with life 😀
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moving on is something good, we can’t hold forever to things that made us feel bad …Glad that you don’t feel like this right now 🙂 ! People should feel happy, not sad!
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@scent of my heart: thx for tht 😀 appreciate
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Awesome poem!
I love its flow and the emotions expressed throughout.
Wonderful picture.
Peace to you.
(my posts for potluck)
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@notjeffery welcome to the blog…thanks for the comment, its an old poem 😀
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moving piece, love the image,
cool poem!
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@jingle thanks for the comment 🙂 the picture as i have linked isn mine..i’l try and participate in your contest 🙂
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I invite you to attend Thursday Poets Rally week 31 hosted by Jingle!
sign in, link in a poem, poetry awards are assigned upon meeting the requirement.
let me know when you are ready.
Thanks a lot.
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nice poem..i guess whoever was your inspiration for this poem,would have forgiven u after reading this..:)..or was it just a bryan adams overdose??
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@chitz this is an old poem i dont remember the outcome 😉 yea lots of bryan adams was happening then
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