aniruddha pathak

OUAT4: Forgive Me

In poetry on October 11, 2010 at 19:40

When the cold breeze of winter
troubles your heart in the centre
Coz of my poor thinking
that sends your mind itching
the little thing my heart expects
Please forgive me

I know I’m crazy
for I’ve troubled you
without even thinking
that it’ll trouble me too

The sea of guilt has poured
in every corner of my heart
and eyes are filled deep within
with tears that roll down fast
the little thing my heart expects
Please forgive me

Time is moving fast
and confessions to be made
I’m a silly boy
messing thing in every phase
Shamelessly still
The only thing my heart expects
Please forgive me

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  2. This made me remember the bryan adams number 😀
    But nicely done …..and lots of things left to interpretation…..deep poem indeed


  3. You have a sad side too ….
    this is amazing ani..


  4. great expression..


  5. guilt can make you feel really deep and sometimes forgiveness is the only healing touch! nice poem!


  6. Awesome poem!
    I love its flow and the emotions expressed throughout.
    Wonderful picture.

    Peace to you.
    (my posts for potluck)


  7. moving piece, love the image,
    cool poem!


    I invite you to attend Thursday Poets Rally week 31 hosted by Jingle!
    sign in, link in a poem, poetry awards are assigned upon meeting the requirement.
    let me know when you are ready.
    Thanks a lot.


  9. nice poem..i guess whoever was your inspiration for this poem,would have forgiven u after reading this..:)..or was it just a bryan adams overdose??


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