aniruddha pathak

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My first girlfriend..

In poetry on June 2, 2009 at 10:49

I wish I could

Jump off that train

Come back to you

Hold you again

 

For I know my love

How it feels

To let go a part

So close to heart

 

I was foolish to think

I’ve grown

For I am helpless without you

In world unknown

 

How I long for you my love

To come and hold

My first girlfriend

“My Mom” they told

 

I have been thinking about doing this post as a dedication to my first girlfriend my mom..sorry mom i have been lazy 🙂

  1. silently expressed..the greatest love.
    lov u for this post…it’s amazing..dedicated to all mothers
    🙂

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    Disha 2 June 2009 at 11am

  2. This is so cute! Has your mom read it?

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    Prasi 3 June 2009 at 10am

  3. wow! lovely 🙂

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    Roopa 4 June 2009 at 5am

  4. thank you hai 🙂

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    aniruddhapathak 5 June 2009 at 7am

  5. so sweet! loved it!

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    Neha Kapoor 5 June 2009 at 7am

    • hi kaddu (pretty wierd nick :))

      Thanks for your comment…i must confess i confused two kadambaris on indiblogger and both of u have kaddu as nick so that didn help either…

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      aniruddha pathak 5 June 2009 at 8pm

  7. lovely lovely poem, your mum must read it!! make sure you print it on some good paper and frame it…i bet she will love it..

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    Ruchi 8 June 2009 at 5am

  10. wow this is so cute!hehe..

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    prachi 10 June 2009 at 1pm

  11. So cute! loved it.

    I would like to share one of my poems on mother A miracle ray. Hope you liked it.

    by the way, voted for your poems at indiblogger.
    cheers!

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    Deependra 23 October 2009 at 10am

  12. my pappa is also my first boyfreind .. (only one actually) cute poem .. : D

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    Aria 24 October 2009 at 5pm

  13. Hey this is really sweet… 🙂 i was smliling all the while when i read it.

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    Harshika_s 27 October 2009 at 7am

  14. […] I have said enough about my mom being my first girlfriend and being the one I am the closest too, its time she gets some more footage here ( By the way she […]

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  18. Nice one!… ❤

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    cheth 9 May 2010 at 8pm

  19. awww… too cute 🙂
    well its been posted on the rite day i guess 😛 😉

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    Ashwathy 10 May 2010 at 4am

  20. sweetest…. loveliest…n cutest… :):)

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    shivee 10 May 2010 at 6am

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