aniruddha pathak

NaBloPoMo:Post 29:Forgive

In poetry on July 29, 2009 at 20:04

 

Each time i plan
You’re there to laugh
You dont get hugs
you’re jealous i thought

So what do you do
you shoot down hugs
and i the fool
keep praying to thee

So stand up and listen
I wont say this again
no more prayers
for you silly brain

Forgive me now
and i will laugh
Almighty you are
No choice you got

  1. kya hua? bhagwan se itna gussa!
    >:D<

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    prachi 29 July 2009 at 9pm

  2. Totally off beat, but have you read Scott Adam’s ‘God’s Debris’ . Its awesome:D

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    Meira 30 July 2009 at 4am

  3. i like this one… good departure from ur other posts…

    and yes, i m sure everyone will have atleast once in their lives come across such a situation. i’m no different! 🙂

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    Ashwathy 30 July 2009 at 5am

  4. some prayers r better unanswered 😉

    Keshi.

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    Keshi 30 July 2009 at 6am

  5. This reminded me of a line from Tagore’s poetry.
    Says beccause of me, your existense is not a lie, because of me, you have come down on earth.
    Great mind think alike Aniruddha!

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    aparna 30 July 2009 at 6am

  6. Very well written
    Nice blog

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    Gayatri 30 July 2009 at 8am

  7. ..and thats life.. and therefore we move on…. 🙂

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    Priya 30 July 2009 at 9am

  8. I hope god is listening!! 😛

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    Ria 30 July 2009 at 9am

  9. thnxx for visiting.

    u too have a wonderful blog. keep visiting

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    sonal 30 July 2009 at 10am

  10. what a contradictory phase of emotional vehemence.. when yo are scorning and at the same time pitying yourself… good juxtaposition.
    He is still laughing… you know because it’s His play we are into and yet we are given a freewill. Isn’t our entire base of living and existence is contradictory?
    We have reason and free will as the Bible says yet we are the most tied and bound creatures sprawling on the planet… We fight, argue, thump our feet,pull hair… still do what’s being thrown at us
    sometimes I wonder how make-believe our life is. we do ye it’s not we who are doing.. some invisible power is operating beyond us and working things around…. 🙂
    Aah bewildering and confusing!

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    rarequibbles 30 July 2009 at 12pm

  11. I don’t remember the exact words of this quote I read somewhere, but the gist of it was that when God solves your problem, it’s because you have faith in her/his ability… When God doesn’t solve your problem, it’s because she/he has faith in yours!

    Profound, I thought!

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    Prasi 30 July 2009 at 12pm

  12. vry nice..it happened with evryone…but wid me many times..

    take care..

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    dreaming eyes 30 July 2009 at 3pm

  13. Hey ! nice one 🙂

    Long time i haven’t read any of your comments on my blog 😦

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    Screenage Scribbler 30 July 2009 at 6pm

  14. wow.
    super cute.
    very b’ful.:)

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    sonal 31 July 2009 at 8am

  15. thanks meira found the copy 🙂

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    aniruddha pathak 31 July 2009 at 8am

  16. Hmmm…A deviation. from the usual emotion…You are forgiven I am sure….You have shown attitude and for that you score!
    I have lost it..I am outta here….

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    Choco 3 August 2009 at 3pm

  17. :sigh: I’ve felt this way too.
    But then you realise, maybe He does have a point in ignoring our prayers sometimes.

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    Neha Kapoor 4 August 2009 at 4pm

  18. This is rather good. Its nice to be here reading you .. : )

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    Aria 21 August 2009 at 10am

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