He felt like grabbing those balls of fire that were hanging, red, blue, yellow and green.
Suddenly the place was crowded, and he felt suffocated.
It was his turn now, and his mom helped him go through it.
He was however baffled to see that
“Mumma why is the elephant sitting on the mouse?”
Silent Expressions 
Ganpati Bappa Morya ! I’m missing Mumbai Ganesh Utsav 😦
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but you were here last weekend isnt it?
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Ya but that’s that !! Now i’m not there 😦
BTW did i mention that I was in mumbai ?? Oh FB is it ?
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:)…I felt dumb for some seconds…And then it hit me! (blush) 😀
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hehe atleast it hit you choco 😀 …
i just tried to put myself into kids shoes who see it for the first time
this is what i could think of
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🙂 The celebrations are hge in bombay hai na..
i really want to see it some day!
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yea bebu..its really huge..and from yesterday itself immersion has started which means a lot of traffic
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the last sentence was classic! 🙂
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thanks ashi 😀
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LOL!
You know what I was thinking. Was trying hard to relate some disney show with “elephant sitting on mouse”….and then I thought, ‘wait. i dont think an elephant ever sat on mickey mouse. so what is this about. Okay M, read it again’.
Well I cheated. I read the comments.. and NOW I get it!! 😛
😀
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hehe Disney show?? i remember an elephant being a part of Tom and jerry
but it was cute 😛 your line of thought that is Miss M 😀
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@Nu: Yea FB 😀
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cuteeee! 😀
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hehe thanks oRange* whats the asterix for?
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just!
orange looks rather boring ..thus, oRange* ..
this doesnt look as dull 😛
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Heheh kids love this God for some reason. The child’s thoughts are very well captured 🙂
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thanks shruthi 🙂
this god surely is loved by kids..they now have a cartoon too on ganesha
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Yeah have seen it. My cousin’s son is mighty addicted to it 😀
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Poor mouse. Ganeshji has been sitting on it forever.
The celebration here is pretty low key this time, hai na? I have noticed you use a lot of mother-son situations while writing. Are you your mom’s favourite?
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Hehe nothing like that aparna..though i think i am :D..but yes i do weave in some instances that i am witness to
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Sweet.. actually more than the mouse I pity Ganesh ji, it must be uncomfortable for Him but still he manages without distressing the mouse..
you’ve tempted me to to try these 55 words exercises again ..
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hehe it would be great to read them aria..Hehe i actually did not think of this angle that ganeshji will be uncomfy 😀
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heyy…after reading the comment box i got to knw dat its realated to ganesh utsav.otherwise i dint get it at first.. 🙂
And in Delhi its not celebrated…so i hv nvr seen it 😦
May be in near furture wud get the opportunity to feel and see dis celebration.. 🙂
take care..
enjoy life..
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@ dreaming eyes: haath upar kar ke khade ho jao chalo 😛
I know yaar, in delhi no one celebrates it this way. Here in mumbai its quite big, goes on for 10 days 😀
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happy ganesh!!!
good one!
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thanks shradha
happy ganesh chaturthi to you too
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good one!!
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thanks ria 😀
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Hey! happy ganesh chaturthi to you!
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thank you hai
did you post your award yet?
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Oh my! Nice way to stump us 😀
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thanks neha ..glad you were stumped 😀
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I really didnt get it at the first read! Then saw ganeshotsav as a label and eureka!!
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hehe good you got it in end 😀
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Clean bowled dude. Nice one.
Keep Rocking,
PN.
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thanks ocean29
Welcome to the blog..hope to see you around..and if you have a blog do drop in the link
cheers
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Awww…how innocent!!
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hai na hai na 😀
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thats was really a sweet one. 🙂
God bless!!
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hey thanks swati…i’m glad you liked it. Welcome to the blog 🙂
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saw your last post as well 🙂 it was indeed an eye opener..
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@oRange do you write a blog?
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yaap. just started though ..some days back!
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drop in the link oRange
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http://www.dumdee-dee.blogspot.com
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heheeh.. You know..I missed it at first and re-read it..then got it.. heheh Sillly me!! 🙂
U could have posted it as quiz for dumb people like me.. 😛
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Nice one. Fodder for godly thought….
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thanks iblurb why didnt you leave your website add? 😉
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Hehe… http://iblurb.wordpress.com
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hehe…lovely
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thanks so much megha 🙂
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I read it twice and then I saw the tag of ‘Ganeshotsav’to understand it.. Very nicely described.. I found it very cute..
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thanku soulmate 🙂 no worries many readers could not figure this one out
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