aniruddha pathak

Baby keeps Sand

In poetry on May 27, 2011 at 09:32

Like a baby
with his little hand
I tried holding on
To this timeless sand

The harder I clench
The more I lose
It keeps coming back
and claims it will bruise

The baby loves sand
and is happy when he holds
He tries harder each time
You will lose he has been told

Who should decide?
The baby or the sand?
Whether to stay
or leave the baby’s hand?

  1. sand doesnt leave the hand that easily if u’ve noticed.. it always manages to cling on a bit πŸ™‚ hope tht answers ur query πŸ™‚


  2. Loved the thought πŸ™‚

    Hold on to the baby I would say…atleast there is hope that way


  3. maybe baby should try holding on to water next? πŸ™‚


  4. murphy’s law might help u decide who gets to keep what!!
    n btw who’s at or d sand??


  5. Yes baby loves holding the sand ‘cuz it’s fun for the baby and so baby should keep trying to hold on to the sand as long as he still enjoys it πŸ™‚


  6. nice admiration ….
    nice words too
    keep writing & smiling.. πŸ™‚


  7. lovely words…nicely crafted lines!


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