So I wake up to this
grey dark sky
Scared to move
It will gobble me why?
Step out on street
to find my own space
Pushed around now
you know I’m a disgrace
Walk into the
corner of room
wish to be engulfed
with all this gloom
Banging my head
on this black wall
signals of breaking down
How good is this fall
To pull me out
Now you appear
I’m not even reaching
to hold you near
This pain is a friend
Wont leave me now
The flowing Scarlet drops
My solace some how
aniruddha pathak
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Ouch! this was sad 😦
But I enjoyed the flow of emotions in your poetic notes 😀
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@CB: thanks for liking this one too 😀
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awww.. Its just a phase in life .. It wil pass by soon 🙂
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@kiddo thanks for everything 🙂
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Nice and dark…
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@sharmila: welcome to the blog 🙂 keep commenting 😀
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Bless you!
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very visual imagery, well done.
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@jingle poetry thanks for encouragement
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THIS-SAD-MOOD-DOES-NOT-LOOK-GOOD-ON-YOU!
PS. It looks good on me! 😉
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@shagufta it doesnt look good on anyone 🙂
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As much i liked reading this , i knew this feeling well .. Sad words ..
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@nimue: I know nimue, just let out the feelings here 😛
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deep feelings that pull and bind….evocative. 🙂
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@rekha thanks rekha..true feelings 😀
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We all hate it , but we cannot escape from it , coz they teach us lessons and most of all , to love ourself more deeply . Hope you come out of it soon and find more beauty in life ! 🙂
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@adreamygal thanks for those kind words 🙂
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Nicely written. Eventually, in the corner will appear a sky.
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@anil:welcome to the blog, and i hope to see sky soon 🙂
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😦 Deep and beautiful.. But sad..
Also. Why does the guy in your poems never take a step towards making up? It’s almost as if he wants to girl to understand… Read his mind… Forgive.. Take that first step towards making up…
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@Choco hehe there were happy poems of making up too darling 🙂
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Aaargh!!! Why will my face not show up here!!?!! 😥
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Ouch! 😦 sounds painful… hey ani if that reflects ur state of mine… I’m always here if u wanna talk…
Beautiful poetry there…but heart rending 😦
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@ashwathy dont worry 😀 >:D<
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