aniruddha pathak

Scarlet drops

In poetry on March 17, 2011 at 09:26


So I wake up to this

grey dark sky

Scared to move

It will gobble me why?


Step out on street

to find my own space

Pushed around now

you knowΒ I’m a disgrace


Walk into the

corner of room

wish to be engulfed

with all this gloom


Banging my head

on this black wall

signals of breaking down

How good is this fall


To pull me out

Now you appear

I’m not even reaching

to hold you near


This pain is a friend

Wont leave me now

The flowing Scarlet drops

My solace some how

  1. Ouch! this was sad 😦
    But I enjoyed the flow of emotions in your poetic notes πŸ˜€


  2. awww.. Its just a phase in life .. It wil pass by soon πŸ™‚


  3. Nice and dark…


  4. Greetings:

    Week 27 Poetry Potluck is open, welcome/Thanks (4) joining us…share your poetry with us today…

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    Happy Monday,
    Bless you!

    very visual imagery, well done.



    PS. It looks good on me! πŸ˜‰


  6. As much i liked reading this , i knew this feeling well .. Sad words ..


  7. deep feelings that pull and bind….evocative. πŸ™‚


  8. We all hate it , but we cannot escape from it , coz they teach us lessons and most of all , to love ourself more deeply . Hope you come out of it soon and find more beauty in life ! πŸ™‚


  9. Nicely written. Eventually, in the corner will appear a sky.


  10. 😦 Deep and beautiful.. But sad..

    Also. Why does the guy in your poems never take a step towards making up? It’s almost as if he wants to girl to understand… Read his mind… Forgive.. Take that first step towards making up…


  11. Aaargh!!! Why will my face not show up here!!?!! πŸ˜₯


  12. Ouch! 😦 sounds painful… hey ani if that reflects ur state of mine… I’m always here if u wanna talk…

    Beautiful poetry there…but heart rending 😦


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