aniruddha pathak

My Sunshine

In poetry on March 9, 2011 at 22:49

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Its a perfect morning
As I wake up by your side
To see my sunshine smile
My day is brighter, You decide

Two minutes is all you want
As you tuck yourself in me
The hug keeps getting tighter
as its time for me to leave

That smirk on your face
Makes me wonder for a while
Pounce on me you will
This world can go take a hike

The wardrobe is now open
As you sit down all confused
“Too many”, I say is the problem
You grin and reply “Too few”

Now the rose meets the cheek
As I see you turn away
Wish I could live in this moment
Even tears now will betray

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  1. If those are tears of joy, they are permitted ..otherwise i dnt want to think of a sad end .. This was super lovely Ani !! so dreamy and sweet ..

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  2. Where do u come up with these ideas? 🙂 The poetry just seems to flow in motion…

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  3. ok..to the author might not be the same as to the reader. as a reader i am free to interpret the way i want so i take this as an happy ending and a very lovely one at that.. and yea waiting for the random one.. 🙂

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  4. Finally a happy poem from u !!! and yes even i interpret the end as a happy one as the tears r of mixed emotions of joy and parting for sometime till u meet again

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  5. A nice happy poem. I cud almost picture it in front of me. 🙂

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  6. omg this is sooo sooo cute ! i love it 🙂

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  7. B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L! :-)*I’m politely shouting*

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  8. Pleasure was all mine after reading your poem 🙂 I have been around…sometimes lurking though 😉

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  9. Oh lurking around as in here and there…not exactly *here*. Moreover didn’t see your posts for blog updates on fb…guess missed them if you published something all this while! 😉 😛

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  10. cool..will do 🙂

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  11. Dreamy,sweet and I loved the flow 😀
    The picture goes wonderfully with the words 😛

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  12. Aww I love the too many too few bit. Heart warming 😀

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  13. Touches the heart with sadness. So sad.

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  14. loved it .. as always! 🙂

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  15. welcome back with us..
    amazing job.
    Happy Tuesday.

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  16. real and yet so surreal… 🙂

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