aniruddha pathak

Silent Sound

In poetry on January 6, 2011 at 07:08

This happens to be the first time that Blog adda has picked my post for tangy tuesday. Makes me happy πŸ˜‰

I wait for you
I follow you
This heart never thought
Will be a problem too

And now this pain
“No expectations”
Sorrys you explain
And I Sigh

I sigh
at this Loving Rage
Helpless sadness
Conflicting craze
Two steps forward
Two steps back
Where do I move
Making you sad

I hear in you
this growing pain
As you silently weep
Assuring you’ll be sane
Why dont I hold you?
When you need it now?
This confused moron
Will never figure out how

Theres no mercy needed
And none deserved
So I hold back myself
And close my fists
Submerge in
This ocean of guilt
Losing all hope
To be around
You gave up on me
Will mute this
Silent sound

  1. A very nice poem! but somehow I felt the pic doesn’t match with the words..


  2. as usual its beautiful!! but a lot of hurt and pain


  3. I usually end up feeling for the other character of your poems !! Touching post ,, and yes, the pic needs to be changed !


  4. very beautifully expressed.. i like ‘Two steps forward
    Two steps back,.. awesome.. following your blog now


  5. Sometimes feelings are irreversible:) Awesome !!!


  6. Painful…..but then just such beauty in it….


  7. So touching! So beautiful! πŸ™‚


  8. I liked it..has it been read by the expected to be read person? πŸ˜‰


  9. very deep feeling expressed can relate to it …God bless you …keep expressing its a form of creativity…sometime pain is the reason to trigger it…


  10. Hey! I visited your blog because I wanted to check in case you had put up any news about Audi campaign. I had invited you.

    But your blog took my by surprise, and threw me out of the professional interest, it is super interesting, loved the format, it is neat, very unlike many blogs I have seen. Wish I could read, I have only looked.

    Check my blog, I think you will appreciate.. I write poetry. Even I follow Daniel Joshi… I love his pics!


    • @malvika surely i remember and i had sent you an email apologising for not being able to make it due to my dance class πŸ™‚ Any ways welcome to my blog and i will surely visit your blog right away. I am glad you liked the template, i have kept it clean so that people can focus on what i write rather than get distracted by background :).

      I love daniel too, once i saw a picture on his blog and wrote a poem out of it πŸ˜›


  11. Silence is golden and your thoughts are truly brilliant!


  12. […] : Aniruddha Pathak What : Silent Sound Tangy : A well written poem by Aniruddha. This poem is on love, hurt and conclusions. Go through it […]


  13. Amazing! Read it twice to soak every emotion in the words. Lovely. πŸ™‚


  14. Hey Aniruddha, do you mind if I share this blog post on my Facebook page? Its too good not to share. πŸ™‚


  15. Very beautifully written, just thinking to myself that its so freaking hard sometimes to not say or do something when we really want to inne.


  16. its very poetic you know. You should have someone tune this up and make it into a song, quite lyrical, it is.


  17. hey ani, this poem is too amazing, it’s like u just put my thoughts into words πŸ™‚ keep up the gr8 work..glad to have met u and known u!


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