Dont walk away
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As you curl away
and I look back
a tear trickles down
as I move on to packWith a heavy heart
I wonder how
Every time i manage
to hurt you nowYou are not even angry
Goes on to hurt more
Wish you had slapped
and shown me the doorAs i sink deeper
in this ocean of guilt
To give one last hug
you rush out of the quiltHow do i let you know
As stupid as i can get
to repeat the same mistake
and then cry and regretI wish you would know
this is not the real me
Probably the worst part
Is all that you now seeSorrys have been abused
I have nothing left to say
Helpless and foolishly I hope
Please dont walk away
Silent Expressions 
Loved it for its simplicity of putting across the kind of feelings it did (rather, the kind I perceived I guess).
P.S. diametrically opposite of sorts to your last post, no?
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@rini the last post was a happy post..something i havent written since ages…what feelings did you perceive is what i would like to know 🙂
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Its the sweetest sorry anyone could say… hope u were forgiven..
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@kookie: Its all fiction kookie 🙂
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I cant believe that you would have done something like to anyone…to hve to ask that kind of an apology…!
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@ashi all fiction na baba..where are you? are you back? should i assume i am getting better at imagining and writing 😉 ?
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Nice story. I am hoping none of this is real life for you. Hugs. And yeah I am back on wordpress. Check my blog for new posts.
Love, Sooper cub
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@md610 i’ll have to go through google reader to search for your link you should have dropped it here..neways DM if you can..and me sooo likes you signing off as sooper cub 😀
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its http://mindflirting.wordpress.com/
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@md610 fiction all the way 😀
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Such a beautifully written piece… Last four lines were magic… Loved every word of this.
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Sorrys have been abused
I have nothing left to say
Helpless and foolishly I hope
Please dont walk away
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@hitesh oh man welcome to the blog and thanks for the kind words..even i wonder how i wrote those last 4 lines 😀
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Hey, long time ya.. 🙂 how have you been? amazing one… 🙂
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@priya i know long time 🙂 me has been sick and then was dancing 😀 thankoooo you get huggs >:D<
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I can’t stop thinking that you wrote this for your mom 😛
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@atrisa haha no this time it isnt for mom 🙂 tell me how is it now 🙂
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Awesome Ani… I actually can not buy this point that it is all fiction…. The words have so much of depth.. the intense feelings.. very nicely written >:D<
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@swetaa i hope you are doing good..been a long time since i heard from you 🙂 i am really getting good at it i guess 😉
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Sweet sweet sweet
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@pesto sauce: thank you thank you thank you 😉
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a ‘figment of experience’ or a ‘figment of imagination’..wtever it is..its b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l. 🙂
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@serendipity00serendipity thank you for the compliment 😀
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If someone wrote me an apology this sweet, I’d forgive a million hurts!
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@tangerine thats the sweetest comment this poem recieved so far..honoured 🙂
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Been there, done that sorta feelings haunt me now .. This was splendid !!
PS : i have this image in my laptop from a month now to write something inspired by it .. guess, i will not write now. Can’t beat this poem 🙂
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@ladynimue wow thanks for the compliment..i will wait for your poem..sometimes some pictures do inspire isnt it 😀
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this ones sad too but has touched my heart ..wish you loads of luck n happiness with ur writing & ur muse 😉
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my all time fav..re-reading this again and again….
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I’m sorry dunno how i missed replying to this comment but thanks again
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dis one makes me come back to ur blog again n again 😀
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