aniruddha pathak

Dont walk away

In poetry on December 20, 2010 at 11:56
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Dont walk away

 

As you curl away
and I look back
a tear trickles down
as I move on to pack

With a heavy heart
I wonder how
Every time i manage
to hurt you now

You are not even angry
Goes on to hurt more
Wish you had slapped
and shown me the door

As i sink deeper
in this ocean of guilt
To give one last hug
you rush out of the quilt

How do i let you know
As stupid as i can get
to repeat the same mistake
and then cry and regret

I wish you would know
this is not the real me
Probably the worst part
Is all that you now see

Sorrys have been abused
I have nothing left to say
Helpless and foolishly I hope
Please dont walk away

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  1. Loved it for its simplicity of putting across the kind of feelings it did (rather, the kind I perceived I guess).

    P.S. diametrically opposite of sorts to your last post, no?

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  2. Its the sweetest sorry anyone could say… hope u were forgiven..

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  3. I cant believe that you would have done something like to anyone…to hve to ask that kind of an apology…!

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  4. Nice story. I am hoping none of this is real life for you. Hugs. And yeah I am back on wordpress. Check my blog for new posts.

    Love, Sooper cub

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  5. Such a beautifully written piece… Last four lines were magic… Loved every word of this.


    Sorrys have been abused
    I have nothing left to say
    Helpless and foolishly I hope
    Please dont walk away

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  6. Hey, long time ya.. 🙂 how have you been? amazing one… 🙂

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  7. I can’t stop thinking that you wrote this for your mom 😛

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  8. Awesome Ani… I actually can not buy this point that it is all fiction…. The words have so much of depth.. the intense feelings.. very nicely written >:D<

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  9. a ‘figment of experience’ or a ‘figment of imagination’..wtever it is..its b.e.a.u.t.i.f.u.l. 🙂

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  10. If someone wrote me an apology this sweet, I’d forgive a million hurts!

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  11. Been there, done that sorta feelings haunt me now .. This was splendid !!

    PS : i have this image in my laptop from a month now to write something inspired by it .. guess, i will not write now. Can’t beat this poem 🙂

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  12. this ones sad too but has touched my heart ..wish you loads of luck n happiness with ur writing & ur muse 😉

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  13. my all time fav..re-reading this again and again….

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  14. I’m sorry dunno how i missed replying to this comment but thanks again

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  15. dis one makes me come back to ur blog again n again 😀

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