aniruddha pathak

55 words or less:Its time to leave

In 55 words or less on November 11, 2010 at 05:16

She went through her list of dishes again.

Had she done enough.

She wished he would come to her and tell her that he will not leave.

He could see tears at the corner of her eye so he had to give her this one last hug and say

“Mom I aint going forever, I’ll be back”.

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  2. MAA tujhe Salaam… ;D

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  3. I am missing my mom too after diwali vacations πŸ˜₯

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  4. awww…maa..:) πŸ™‚

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  5. nice Ani! πŸ™‚

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  6. I JUST LOVE your 55 words! They are superb!

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  7. so sweet!!!! πŸ™‚

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  8. awww πŸ™‚ mamma’s boy! πŸ˜€

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  9. SWEET LIKE TAMARIND πŸ™‚

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  10. sweet πŸ™‚

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  11. ahhh you are a pro at this πŸ™‚

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  12. Hmm..reminded me of the terse things I write πŸ™‚

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  13. wow !! brilliantly done πŸ™‚

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  14. Mothers, I tell you! at times I feel its a feat for them to feed us πŸ™‚

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  15. Touching! You are too good with 55 words or less

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