aniruddha pathak

#OUAT5:Does/Doesn’t matter

In poetry on October 25, 2010 at 17:20

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Doesn’t matter
If the sun doesn’t shine
does matter
if you ain’t fine

Doesn’t matter
If there’s no red rose
Dose matter
if you aren’t close

Doesn’t matter
I have to cut loose
Does matter
if you ever lose

Doesn’t matter
If i have no buck
Does matter
If you are out of luck

Doesn’t matter
If I am prey
Does matter
If you aren’t happy and gay

Doesn’t matter
If I have to die
Does matter
If you snap our tie

P.S: Do not miss the desperate attempts to rhyme, and use of words like “die, cut-loose” …sigh teenage πŸ˜‰

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  1. Lovely. I like it very much. πŸ™‚

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  3. You are a natural! πŸ™‚

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  4. πŸ™‚ i m smiling so much after reading this.. wish I could find my old diary!

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  5. i liked this πŸ™‚ simple and flowing !!

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  6. totally relate to the ‘need to rhyme’! πŸ˜› Also, I wonder, is the muse the same for all of these?

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  7. The desire to want to see someone else happy … beautifully done !

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