Your slightest glimpse
sends my heart pulsating
I’m totally dumbstruck
and my eyes stop blinking
Your unflagging presence
makes me feel complete
when I glance at your eyes
I Β understand what they speak
You stepped in this relation
with an air of happiness
You’ve helped me come out
from a deep state of loneliness
Keep talking to my soul
assure me you’ll always be close
For me you’ll always be
the purest dew on rose
Trust me i didn do Drugs in school π
cute! : ) and quite romantic.. I envy people who rhyme without drugs ; )
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@aria: thanks π
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ahan cute π u didnt do drugs but u drugged us with this poem π
Amazing π
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@scribbling gal: i look at these poems and laugh now…how naive could i be π
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So swit you are! Do you ever get angry? You seem like the kind of person who’d always have this calming effect on people around π
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@atrisa thankoo π i try never to get angry..but my anger is like that bottle of champagne π believe in hugs a lot π it cures everything
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Nicely done poem
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@prats thanks mate for the comment π
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Haaye, kiski justajoo mein aise likha aapne!! Kya likha aapne!!!
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@sakshi hey thanks..OUAT is all once upon a time…kaafi purani hai π
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hahahahaha..thats was uber sweet… π
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@Priya thank you π
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oh mr poet..lovely
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@sulagna thank yew π these were written when i was in school haha
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nice one, love is a drug, none as intoxicating. ;))
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@rek thx for the comment π do leave a link to your blog if you write
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http://www.randomsoulmusings.blogspot.com
http://www.achronicleofdreams.blogspot.com
both my blogs as requested, check them when you are free and do comment :positive words and constructive criticism definitely appreciated(I am still testing the waters). π
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@rek thanks for the links will visit and comment
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Beautiful π
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@nidhign : thankoo for visiting the blog dear π
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Totally lovey-dovey post. π
Somebody is head-over-heels in love I guess??..
In any case please do look at my entry for the Share Life contest on Indiblogger….and vote for it only if you find it deserving enough.
http://www.indiblogger.in/indipost.php?post=34632
Another request…please do not vote for posts you do not like. This helps judge a contest fairly!
Thanks! π
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@samadrita going through the post will vote if i like it π welcome to the blog
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Thanks for the vote Aniruddha! Its just that most people are going about shamelessly asking for votes…and IMO their posts are not up to the mark. I am getting to read better entries but which aren’t getting votes just coz they’re not shamelessly promoting themselves. I’ve no intention of spamming other people’s blogs either. But in the end this is what it boils down to…the one with best spamming or networking skills wins.
In any case it was a pleasure being on your blog. Will revisit for sure. And I hope you read my post. Thanks again! π
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Read your post..liked it..and when Tikuli whos like mommie has voted for you i dont even need to think twice π
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neat!
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@ji welcome to the blog π thanks for the comment
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a poem that really looks, feel and sounded like a poem that we all are familiar of.. great!
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@fiveloaf thank you so much, its a very old poem i wrote π
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My Dear Culprit Aniruddha,
Those miniature roses will stay in my mind forever.. Needless to say I love flowers and beauty!!
Yours words are woven with so much Love and feelings.. It was quite a pleasure reading you.. specially when it comes from as sweet a “culprit” as you are.. Happy to see you linked.. π
My entry in the Potluck- http://oliviasmindlymatters.wordpress.com/2010/10/16/sinfully-me/
Happy Potluck xox
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@Olivia:Dear olivia that was such a sweet comment that i have decided to follow your blog right away π so will keep bugging ya π
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