aniruddha pathak

OUAT2: Dew on Rose

In poetry on October 2, 2010 at 07:46

Your slightest glimpse
sends my heart pulsating
I’m totally dumbstruck
and my eyes stop blinking


Your unflagging presence
makes me feel complete
when I glance at your eyes
I Β understand what they speak


You stepped in this relation
with an air of happiness
You’ve helped me come out
from a deep state of loneliness


Keep talking to my soul
assure me you’ll always be close
For me you’ll always be
the purest dew on rose

Trust me i didn do Drugs in school πŸ˜‰

  1. cute! : ) and quite romantic.. I envy people who rhyme without drugs ; )


  2. ahan cute πŸ™‚ u didnt do drugs but u drugged us with this poem πŸ˜›
    Amazing πŸ™‚


  3. So swit you are! Do you ever get angry? You seem like the kind of person who’d always have this calming effect on people around πŸ˜›


  4. Nicely done poem


  5. Haaye, kiski justajoo mein aise likha aapne!! Kya likha aapne!!!


  6. hahahahaha..thats was uber sweet… πŸ˜€


  7. oh mr poet..lovely


  8. nice one, love is a drug, none as intoxicating. ;))


    both my blogs as requested, check them when you are free and do comment :positive words and constructive criticism definitely appreciated(I am still testing the waters). πŸ˜‰


  10. Beautiful πŸ™‚


  11. Totally lovey-dovey post. πŸ™‚
    Somebody is head-over-heels in love I guess??..

    In any case please do look at my entry for the Share Life contest on Indiblogger….and vote for it only if you find it deserving enough.
    Another request…please do not vote for posts you do not like. This helps judge a contest fairly!
    Thanks! πŸ™‚


  12. Thanks for the vote Aniruddha! Its just that most people are going about shamelessly asking for votes…and IMO their posts are not up to the mark. I am getting to read better entries but which aren’t getting votes just coz they’re not shamelessly promoting themselves. I’ve no intention of spamming other people’s blogs either. But in the end this is what it boils down to…the one with best spamming or networking skills wins.
    In any case it was a pleasure being on your blog. Will revisit for sure. And I hope you read my post. Thanks again! πŸ™‚


  13. a poem that really looks, feel and sounded like a poem that we all are familiar of.. great!


  14. My Dear Culprit Aniruddha,
    Those miniature roses will stay in my mind forever.. Needless to say I love flowers and beauty!!

    Yours words are woven with so much Love and feelings.. It was quite a pleasure reading you.. specially when it comes from as sweet a “culprit” as you are.. Happy to see you linked.. πŸ˜€

    My entry in the Potluck-

    Happy Potluck xox


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