aniruddha pathak

The Bench

In poetry on September 29, 2010 at 20:33

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Swaying your head
As you rest it on the shoulder
As i see you whisper
Sweet nothings and smother

A careless brush
of your golden locks
That sigh and tear
and momentary fear

A poke in the stomach
with a chuckle you speak
Bring the head close
to moisten the cheek

Cant stay here no longer
Cant stay up so close
Watching you now with him
Let me tell you It hurts.

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  1. is this from the same era as was the last one??!!!!..Don’t tell me!!!! If yes, can you please train me on how to be so romantically beautiful and articulate???!!!

    but just a question, don’t take it to heart…travelling back and forth in time is well expressed here..but are the last two lines of the second para a reflection of the same time frame as the last two lines of the last para..a bit confused and so the question…

    overall, u express it so beautifully in words.. πŸ™‚

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  2. @priya is this from the same era as was the last one??!!!!.- Nope πŸ™‚

    Don’t tell me!!!! If yes, can you please train me on how to be so romantically beautiful and articulate???!!!- lol you are generous priya πŸ™‚

    but just a question, don’t take it to heart…travelling back and forth in time is well expressed here..but are the last two lines of the second para a reflection of the same time frame as the last two lines of the last para..a bit confused and so the question…- Well Priya to explain it, Its what one feels when he/she looks at another couple πŸ™‚ so i leave it to your imagination if you want it to think of all things happening at the same time or over a period of time πŸ™‚

    overall, u express it so beautifully in words.. — once again thank you so much priya..now that you have asked me so much..i will tell you that i thought of this poem last night on my way back from my dance class in the local train hehe πŸ˜€

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  3. i tell you Aniruddha, Local trains that way are intellectually stimulating, honestly.. ;-D

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  4. ohhh…thats the ultimate place… πŸ˜‰

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  5. And thus runs the bitter sweet tale of love!

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  6. Kya baat hai sir! Awesome… you had talent from long ago it seems.. πŸ™‚

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  7. This leaves a smile on my face, only it is of the ‘oh, well…’ variety. πŸ™‚

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  8. lovely πŸ™‚

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  9. Ouch!!! Reading the last bit actually hurt… 😦

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  10. the bitter-sweet symphony .. touching ..

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  11. Dint see that coming in the end !! was a let down (not your writing, but the sad ending)

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