aniruddha pathak

OUAT 1: Where were you?

In poetry on September 27, 2010 at 18:24

Found my old diary and now as I flip the pages, I see the poems I had written when in school. I am posting them here unedited…there was heavy influence of songs I heard then 🙂

 

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When I gave up hope
and had ordeals to cope
Where were you?

When I didn’t succeed
and had no one to lead
Where were you?

When I lost faith
and was depressed,
Where were you?

When I was alone,
and lost friends I’d known
Where were you?

When I needed care
and had problems to share
Where were you?

Please come back to me,
and set my heart free,
then I’ll tell you,
How close to me are you.

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  1. ohh..since school days u have been so talented and romantically inclined towards life. :).. that sure is overwhelming.. :)…but this poem is simply awesome..fabulous.. 🙂

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  2. So embarrassing and weirdly cute to read stuff you wrote when way young 😛 I can totally relate. Mine too were heavily influenced by the songs I heard that time.

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  3. Very beautifully written…. you know its nice and cute in an innocent sort of way…. I hope you have not lost that innocence in the journey to grow up.

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  4. Awesome :)Love the innocence in it 🙂

    Reading old stuff is great always….when I come across old poem I wrote I love the nostalgia too 🙂

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  5. That’s lovely. It’s nice to go back and look at things you’ve written when you were younger, eh?

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  6. you’re good at it. i understand your poems hehehe

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