aniruddha pathak

What if?

In poetry on May 28, 2010 at 13:07

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What if I promised
to serve breakfast each day
What if I loved you
everyday more than yesterday

What if I promised
to love your messy hair
What if I promised
to speak up when I care

What if I promised
to compliment in new way
What if I promised
to rise up to the queen

What if I promised
to keep all my promises
Would you still
Hang up and walk away?

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  1. Simple, filled with feeling, touching…the words make u feel loved & care for silently

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  2. If you did all these, you would be called a husband 🙂

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  3. amazing..loved it…

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  4. Very nice…so very true, I feel so many similar thoughts ring in our minds when love steps in finally in our lives.
    Keep writing Ani 🙂

    Cheers!!

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  5. love this poem. the blog is beautiful. keep up the good work 🙂

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  6. Long time! awesome poem! 🙂

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  7. Long time..!!! Great read.

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  8. oh how sweet… with a tinge of sadness in the end 🙂 i loved it

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  9. maybe. some women can never be pleased, don’t you know?
    ;p

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  10. What if you had kept your promises?
    What if you had not let the ifs and the buts get in the way?
    What if I read this in a crappy mood?
    And what if it reminds me of people I knew along the way
    What if it means that Mentalie was right
    Some women can never be pleased she says 😐
    But what if the one for whom this was written sees it
    What if she realizes how special Ani is
    What if…
    Lovely! 🙂

    And all the best for your exams 🙂

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    • @choco thankies yaara for the wishes. need them badly 🙂 totally screwed yaar. and about your what if’s Mentalie has put it perfectly really, even then she might not be pleased 😀 Now there have been so many written by me, and none have been read so far 😀

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  11. aww maa
    so u in love
    hmphh

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  12. Ani… no other guy I know can express romance this convincingly 🙂

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  13. i dnt kno…….
    makes me sad each time u ask me dat,
    it reminds me of my inability to conjure thngs up

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  14. thumbzzup from me! 🙂

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  15. Came here after a long time and OMG, was completely floored!
    So did she stay?

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  16. nice questions 😉

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  17. Wow if u fulfilled all these what ifs which girl will ever go away?
    Nice blog

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  18. Its so touching n oh so romantic but the ending leaves one hoping for the speaker that his love remains with him forever rather than walk out on him.

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  19. And here i proclaim you as an eligible bachelor 😛

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  20. He he .. some promises ought to be broken 😉

    Well written 🙂 Gud luck for ur exams 🙂

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  21. That was beautiful! Very touching and from the heart sort of poem!

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  22. If she doesnt stick around .. there are others who are more than willing to settle for that 😛

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  23. Woww..Love it..!!
    Straight from heart.

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  24. Whimsical musings…”what if” are two words that make u dream aloud.

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  25. I like this one for its simplicity 🙂

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  26. Just stopped by. Thrilled and amazed. Good work!

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  27. so..i came upon this..on a “walk in to the office bored” morning..no..the poetry is not awesome or mind-boggling or has me in tears or splits. Its the ‘saying it as it is’..that makes me want to leave a comment…keep up:)

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  28. dunno hw i landed here but its surely one of ur gems 🙂

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  29. a question here.. dis is all fantasy right??? cos such ppl never exists….

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