aniruddha pathak

55 words or less: Concentration

In 55 words or less on March 8, 2010 at 06:11

She was running late.

She sighed.

Another traffic signal.

This was her time; she had to finish it before it turned green.

Her hands moved at a frantic pace.

By now they have been used to finishing this task in seconds.

It turned green.

She smiled looking in the rear view.

Make-up was done.

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  1. ๐Ÿ™‚ nyce 1.. An.. i must say this thing: u really know women well..:):):) mos of us do it every day,,… including ma mum..:):)

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  2. I have never ever tried doing make up at a traffic light till date, especially when I am driving ๐Ÿ™‚

    Nice attempt at 55 fiction though ๐Ÿ˜€

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  3. hahahahaha……good one…i dont do it though…. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. ha ha ha.. good one. that tells women really r very particular about their physical appearance.. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  5. Ah yes…Time management…So very relatable…
    Nice twist. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  6. Cud guess … well written though ๐Ÿ™‚

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  7. haha..neat.
    I could not predict what it was. I earlier thougth she must be one of the kids cleaning gaadi ke sheeshe n earning money outta it signals pe

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  8. aiyyo…wat a post on women’s day ๐Ÿ˜›
    nice ๐Ÿ˜€

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  9. Haha ๐Ÿ˜€ Ready for the daily show.

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  10. you seem to have noticed many women… no wonder you could come up with this post and also know that they can finish their make up at traffic signal as well.. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  11. Totally cool !! Was wondering till the end ๐Ÿ˜€ hehehe Nice one

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  12. hehehe ๐Ÿ˜€ u r growing seriously good with these 55-ers!!

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  13. Nice thing on women’s day ๐Ÿ™‚

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  14. hehehhehehhehe…practise makes a man perfect in writing 55-er and a woman perfect in putting make-up!!!.. :D:D..good one..:)

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  15. noooooooo plzzzzzzzz dont stopppppp……continue with ur 55-ers.. :)..i look fwd to it.. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  16. ๐Ÿ™‚ what an observation!! I just saw something similar in the local today!!

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  17. ohooo…

    terrific ๐Ÿ™‚

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  18. award winning post..wonderfully portrayed.
    hi aniruddha..i m a new follower of ur blog..n i found the “55-ers”, the best section of ur blog..u r absolutely brilliant wid it..keep writting.

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  19. Er, honestly I really thought you were talking about something else! ๐Ÿ˜›

    But this was good!!! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  20. She’s gotto be fast to do make up in a traffic signal. ๐Ÿ™‚ Good one, Ani.

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  21. LOl!!
    Never tried it during traffic signals. I use signals to finish my breakfast!

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  22. he he eh too good! didnt expect the twist!

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