aniruddha pathak

55 words or less: Obsession

In 55 words or less on March 5, 2010 at 11:03

How he enjoyed rubbing his hands over her.

Slowly, as he blew up over her and smiled each time.

Once in a while he would use the spray.

She just stayed there, and never resisted.

Doing this each day gave him so much satisfaction.

Cleaning his laptop was always so therapeutic.

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  1. Irresistible obsession:-)

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  2. 😉 u alwayz rock.. Ani.. nice one..:):)

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  3. It was a smart story. 🙂

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  4. he he that was corny..but good. !

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  5. Ahem…Me thinks he needs to go offline and take a long long walk… 😛

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  6. And..I Hate This Blue Dice…My pic is there in Gravatar..It is your blog that is mad! 😦

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  7. hehehehe… nice one. Fertile imagination, i must say! 😉

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  8. Hee hee 😀 u got a good imagination ani 😛

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  9. hee hee 🙂 you`re good at these 55ers! I`ve tried but I really cant 😦 And heyy, you never mentioned that you play guitar! 🙂 what do you play? Bass? Rhythms?? Classical? what??? Did you know I`ve started learning again? 🙂

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  10. Ahem…
    Somebody is getting really creative day by day.. Liked it >:D<

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  11. hmmm… good imagination 😀

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  12. hahahhahahahahahhahahahahahah……ROFL….

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  13. Aha! I was expecting a car…He is a geek! 😛

    Cool blog! 🙂

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  14. I first thought it was abt BJ then i thought it was abt a barber!

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  15. Hey Ani, I lost your number… Plz mail that to me one more time 🙂

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  16. Okay ignore BJ! And read ur post again thnking its a barber..it makes sense!

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  17. ahhh what a lucky laptop 😀

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  18. Fantastic attempt at 55 fiction Ani 🙂

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  19. A laptop is a ‘she’!! I am wondering..

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  20. 😆 LOL. So true 😀 Cleaning laptop does feel good 😛

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  21. too good..:)..i hereby declare you the king of 55 fiction..:)

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  22. you can clean mine 😉

    anyhow.. i thought you meant someone giving bathe to a dog.. but obsession belied it!

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  23. […] like cleaning i have mentioned it once here. It brings a different kind of calmness and […]

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