She had finally agreed. Tonight was his moment.
Perfume was perfect and the red shirt to go with his blue jeans.
The hostel already had the news, but he was least bothered.
Roomies looked perplexed.
With only five minutes to go and half way through shaving his moustache,
The last powercut of the day!
Silent Expressions 
I wonder how sweetly you put across those simple words in the most rhyming manner:-) Kudos!
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Sunanda:hehe thanks yaara
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Aww bechara!
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@neha: lessons for first date: shave well in time 😛
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Ouch!!! 😀
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@swetaa: 😛
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hahaha..this made me laugh out loud
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@bebu:thanks 😛
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😀
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@nikita: 😛 good that you are smiling
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Now thts a very bad situation to be in… poor guy..
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@soulmate: yea too bad, he shouldn’t have left things for the last moment
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Lol…Damn indeed! I hope you continue this..:D
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@ashley: i dunno about continuing, but i may write something..depends on what inspires me 😛
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lol! perfect! an every day india :p
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@daniel: yepp mate, happens a lot in India 😉
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uh ?!! :)) Too bad …
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@adisha: hehe yea poor chap
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ohh poor guy!! 🙂
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@divyanshi: arey you are reading my posts 😛 good to see you here
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oooooooops!
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@AD: hehe nice to see you here
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tsk..tsk..poor fellow..
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@chitz: so nice to see you back on blog :D..poor fellow should have planned well 😛
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wow I am coming here after a long time and what a treat. I love the crisp 55 word fiction and you have done it again. wonderful
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@tikuli: thanks yaara glad you enjoyed it 😛
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Oh dear!
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@swaram: hehe are you imagining the guy with half moustache? 😛
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My sympathies for the guy
Great work at 55 fiction!!
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@CB: thanks yaara for the comment 🙂
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oh no!!
Poor poor guy!! LOL!!
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@pixie: LOL he should have started getting ready early..his fault 😛
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You seem to be quite the 55er! Cool! 🙂
PS: This is why a moochie is said to be uncool. 😉
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@CG: hehe thanks mate..well lesson is to be ready in time always..who knows when you get a date 😛
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terrible timing!! is there an emergency lamp in place??? 😛
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LOL! ROTFL!! can i put this on my FB pls? of course, with due credit to you 🙂
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ES: Of course you can 🙂 go ahead and lemme know once you put it up you can even tag me my name is same there
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thanks Aniruddha…dunno much about tagging, but have mentioned your blog…here’s the link – http://www.facebook.com/home.php#!/gashmama?ref=profile
do let me know if you would like me to edit it in any way…
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