aniruddha pathak

55 words or less: Damn

In 55 words or less on March 2, 2010 at 09:46

She had finally agreed. Tonight was his moment.

Perfume was perfect and the red shirt to go with his blue jeans.

The hostel already had the news, but he was least bothered.

Roomies looked perplexed.

With only five minutes to go and half way through shaving his moustache,

The last powercut of the day!

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  1. I wonder how sweetly you put across those simple words in the most rhyming manner:-) Kudos!

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  2. Aww bechara!

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  3. Social comments and analytics for this post…

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  4. Ouch!!! πŸ˜€

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  5. hahaha..this made me laugh out loud

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  6. πŸ˜€

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  7. Now thts a very bad situation to be in… poor guy..

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  8. Lol…Damn indeed! I hope you continue this..:D

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  9. lol! perfect! an every day india :p

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  10. uh ?!! :)) Too bad …

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  11. ohh poor guy!! πŸ™‚

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  12. tsk..tsk..poor fellow..

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  13. wow I am coming here after a long time and what a treat. I love the crisp 55 word fiction and you have done it again. wonderful

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  14. My sympathies for the guy
    Great work at 55 fiction!!

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  15. oh no!!
    Poor poor guy!! LOL!!

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  16. You seem to be quite the 55er! Cool! πŸ™‚

    PS: This is why a moochie is said to be uncool. πŸ˜‰

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  17. terrible timing!! is there an emergency lamp in place??? πŸ˜›

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  18. LOL! ROTFL!! can i put this on my FB pls? of course, with due credit to you πŸ™‚

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  19. thanks Aniruddha…dunno much about tagging, but have mentioned your blog…here’s the link – http://www.facebook.com/home.php#!/gashmama?ref=profile
    do let me know if you would like me to edit it in any way…

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