She snuggled close on a chilly morning.
He looked into those inviting grey eyes.
He could not resist the strawberry kissed lips.
It seemed perfect as he went for it.
And then it happened, “Blood!!”
“When are you getting the braces removed?” he cried.
Silent Expressions 
Perfect touch to the soul:-) Keep giving us more such fresh thoughts!
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@sunanda: hey thanks for that will try my best 🙂
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Ha ha ha ha ha
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@dexgle: 😉 thanx mate..welcome to the blog
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talk about anti-climax 😀
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@shruthi: 😛 hehe yea all 55ers should have some anti climax
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khee khee khee! I lurved this one! 😀
It had blood in it 😉
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@kriti: 😛 hehe rush of Blood led to blood too na 😛
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actually cute yet funny..:P:P:P u made me smile again ani..:):)
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@shivee: thanks shiveee :D..keep smiling
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rofl…this was AWESOME 😀
what shaitani dimaag u hav, ani 😉
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@nikita: arey practical problem me thodi hansi dhoondi 😛
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Ah! How I missed your 55 fictions. Yours are the best! 🙂
And that said…Euwwwww….Gross!!! :p
But witty…Very witty… 🙂
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@choco: you the beshttt…if it wasn for you..i would have stopped writing trust me 🙂
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Ewww..yucks..ouch!
kahan kahan dimag chalate ho bebu!
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@prachi:kyu kya hua 😉
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But acha tha! I never miss your 55ers
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LOLzzzz. that was funnny :)) Good one …
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@adisha: thanks 😉
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LOL… awesome anti climax!
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@purnima thanks 😉 maza aaya na 😛
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hehehe…wat a twist!! 😀
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@divyanshi: thanks ..twist me hi maza hai ;P
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Good one 😉
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@aarti: thanks yara..welcome to the blog..hope to see ya arnd 🙂
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good one buddy…lolzzzz…. 🙂
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@madhu:thanks yaara 🙂 keep visiting the blog
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hahaha that’s cool!
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@daniel:thanks a lot mate 🙂
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LOL! That was an unexpected ending!
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@smitha 😉 mazaa aaya na 😛
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ROFLOL hahahha loved it loved it loved it…….. 🙂
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@fruity:thankoo you liked it means acha hoga 😀
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Good gosh! What a morning. Ek toh thand. Upar se Dard 😛
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@meira: hehe eggjhactly 😉 khan ho yaara..no new posts..or even replies to the comments 🙂
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Lol! You know my ex was always scared to kiss his first gf ’cause of the same reason 😀 ROFL!
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@atrisa: where are you yaar..did you reply to all the comments i left for you ;)..it is difficult kissing one with braces hai na 😛
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hahahah. i know someone like that, two someones actually 😀
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@mentalie: i’m sure you missed out on the mushy post .. 😉
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hahaha…i think this happened with u..dats y such a pain and blood in this…wat say…MR.55.. 😉
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@dreaming eyes: hahah nahiiiiii 😀 its all imagination 😀
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poor guy… he he he….
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@soulmate: yea poor guy 🙂
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LOL!!! btw why cant the guy have the braces? 😛
what? Just asking 😀
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@indyeah: Actually it was time for girl to have braces in my 55ers :). Guys have gone through enough in my 55ers so far 🙂
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LOL….what a bloody (awesome) post!!! 😛
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@iforaneye: 😉 yea thankooo 😀
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Very imaginative, definitely original 🙂
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@prerna: hehe yepp yep 🙂
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Hey… ani.. Thanks a lot for your comments on my blog… I know this might be asking a Bit too much, but could you add my blog on http://www.adistorytime.blogspot.com on your blog roll as well ?? I’d love to hear your opinion on my stories there, specially my latest one when you have time ie… 🙂 Take care … Hoping to see more of you around …:)
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@adisha:sure thing will do that 🙂
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hihaha! so what yaar! he should love the braces too! lol
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@neha: damn he sure does now 😛
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Yeah! Wo pyaar hi kya jisme dard na ho 😛
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hey… that started romantic. but the braces part made it a li’l amusing.. but a good one. 🙂 cheers.
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@archana:welcome to the blog 🙂 yea the anticlimax is amusing 😉
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ouchie! you so know how to pinch!
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@AD:hehe yea i do 😉 thanks for the comments
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ROFL 😀
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@swaram: mazaa aaya na 😛
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