aniruddha pathak

55 words or less: Careful

In 55 words or less on February 17, 2010 at 06:24

She snuggled close on a chilly morning.

He looked into those inviting grey eyes.

He could not resist the strawberry kissed lips.

It seemed perfect as he went for it.

And then it happened, “Blood!!”

“When are you getting the braces removed?” he cried.

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  1. Perfect touch to the soul:-) Keep giving us more such fresh thoughts!

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  2. Ha ha ha ha ha

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  3. Social comments and analytics for this post…

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  4. talk about anti-climax 😀

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  5. khee khee khee! I lurved this one! 😀
    It had blood in it 😉

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  6. actually cute yet funny..:P:P:P u made me smile again ani..:):)

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  7. rofl…this was AWESOME 😀
    what shaitani dimaag u hav, ani 😉

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  8. Ah! How I missed your 55 fictions. Yours are the best! 🙂

    And that said…Euwwwww….Gross!!! :p

    But witty…Very witty… 🙂

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  9. Ewww..yucks..ouch!
    kahan kahan dimag chalate ho bebu!

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  10. But acha tha! I never miss your 55ers

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  11. LOLzzzz. that was funnny :)) Good one …

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  12. LOL… awesome anti climax!

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  13. hehehe…wat a twist!! 😀

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  14. Good one 😉

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  15. good one buddy…lolzzzz…. 🙂

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  16. hahaha that’s cool!

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  17. LOL! That was an unexpected ending!

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  18. ROFLOL hahahha loved it loved it loved it…….. 🙂

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  19. Good gosh! What a morning. Ek toh thand. Upar se Dard 😛

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  20. Lol! You know my ex was always scared to kiss his first gf ’cause of the same reason 😀 ROFL!

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  21. hahahah. i know someone like that, two someones actually 😀

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  22. hahaha…i think this happened with u..dats y such a pain and blood in this…wat say…MR.55.. 😉

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  23. poor guy… he he he….

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  24. LOL!!! btw why cant the guy have the braces? 😛
    what? Just asking 😀

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  25. LOL….what a bloody (awesome) post!!! 😛

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  26. Very imaginative, definitely original 🙂

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  27. Hey… ani.. Thanks a lot for your comments on my blog… I know this might be asking a Bit too much, but could you add my blog on http://www.adistorytime.blogspot.com on your blog roll as well ?? I’d love to hear your opinion on my stories there, specially my latest one when you have time ie… 🙂 Take care … Hoping to see more of you around …:)

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  28. hihaha! so what yaar! he should love the braces too! lol

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  29. hey… that started romantic. but the braces part made it a li’l amusing.. but a good one. 🙂 cheers.

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  30. ouchie! you so know how to pinch!

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