Painting toe nails
Tying up hair
Carrying you to bed
I thought i cared
Puckered lips
Mascara kissed eyes
Tease me to the hilt
Each night surprise
And now i miss
the feathered slap
the gentle nudge
the body wrap
Dying in moments
Makes it hard you know
I hope, I End
Before letting go
P.S: This poem was inspired by the photograph posted by my blog friend and amazing photographer Daniel. Show him some love 🙂
simple yet touching use of expression 🙂
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@meeta : thankooo..welcome to the blog 🙂
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That’s just beautiful…amazing work Ani! Love how you evoke such vivid images!
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PB: Thanks so much for the lovely comment 😀
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Another cute one.. keep going!
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Indresh:Thanks did you use the previous one yet 🙂
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you are definitely living up to your blog’s name aren’t you 🙂 loved those lines. and loved the pic too.
Both of you, take a bow 🙂
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@shruthi: silently only expressing na 😀 ..thanks so much >:D<
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That was a magical posts 😀 You beautifully drew a picture before my eyes through your picturesque words.
Fantastic picture and an awesome post.
Keep up the good work buddy 😀
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@chatterbox: You are sweet with your words..thanks for all the encouragement to make me write again 🙂
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Wow is that a clicked picture? Phew. Of course, lovely like always. A little sad, but sadness has so much beauty no? Someone feels all mushy these days, kya baat hai! You say its out of imagination but some inspiration has got to be there na!
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@atrisa: Trust me its all imagination 🙂 some past experience..and some magic of this photograph :). If i see a a cute girl too somewhere, that becomes enough inspiration to write ;)..wait till i write one for you 😛
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Haha pakka flirt 😉
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apt image and wonderful words to describe it 🙂
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Nu: heyy where have you beens :D..was waiting for you to see this..i’m back and will soon land up on your blog..please make necessary arrangements to welcome me 😛
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Nice che! I m actually pleasntly surprised..u write decent poems bebu!
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@prachi: thanks bebu..i have written so many poems..you may want to look at the poems category 😉
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Ahh you churn out gem after gem. Itna dard?
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@shilpadesh: Dard came out of the photo na :D..thanks i’m not churning out anything..it is all on being inspired from things around me 😀
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Awww you are a sweetie!
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are u sure it’s only the piture that inspired u….or is there a morw personal connection wid all the mush u’ve been throwing at us? 😉
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@nikita: Yes it is just the picture..i even told daniel the moment i saw it on his post that i plan to write a poem on it..and he agreed to share it :)..mush is good no 😛
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Charming, indeed! You should be a cook… you’re most adept at churning out just the right recipes. 🙂
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@kriti: Thanks for that suggestion..i’m learning cooking too 😀
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Oohh ohh.. so, when shall at tapko at your place to savour the delicacies?
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Almost stumbled upon your blog!! And now can’t help being glad! Its beautiful.
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@anonymouspoets: thanks so much for visiting 🙂 welcome to the blog. I’m glad you liked it..cya around
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@shilpadesh: 😛 thank you
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WOW Anirudh, that was wonderful….try your hand more on the poems, I am sure you would go go far….
I am impressed..
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@megha: dhanyavad 🙂 ata tula mast lagla..tar chan aste 😀
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hehe…that sentence in marathi doesn’t make sense…
kay boltoyes ? 😀
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That was so beautiful.. :)..Amazing pics and poetry…
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@priya: thanks a lot 😀
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Beautiful! Lovely poem and images!
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@prerna: thanks 😛 image is by daniel
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@atrisa: hehe aisa bola na to pakka one for you coming up soon 😀
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@megha:hehe sorry first time me hi galti 😀
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you have been nominated
http://nupurphatak.blogspot.com/2009/12/avant-garde-bloggies-awards-2009.html
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Nu:thanks so much for the nominations 😀
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hey man its lovely! merry christmas!
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@joshi daniel: finally you get to see it ..thanks :). i hope you recognized your work here
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hey Ani, very lovely piece…your words paint the whole picture….and very nice photography too! cheers
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@ruchi: Welcome to the blog..your comments were missed 😦 hey when are you coming to mumbai for the exhibition?
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lovely expressions
wish i could write like this
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@anjugandhi: That is the sweetest comment 😀
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Very well done Sir. Loved it. 🙂
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@BM: thank you so much.. when do you change your template so that i can follow comments on your blog?
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I do it using “my comments” option in Dashboard and use backtype for blogspot. Is this you are saying ? or something else ?
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@BM: Do you see a check box that i you must have ticked to track comments on my post.There is no such check box on your posts 🙂
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I love the title…you are inspiring me to try my hand at poetry now…may be will try something sooner or later.
Amazing words, amazing photo. Simply loved it.
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@aparna: Yess please do try, i love your writings..i’m sure it will be awesome
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Its not so easy to let go…
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@soulmate: It is not at all easy and that is what i tried my best to pen down here
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWESOME! LOVED it! Poem snap both…
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@purnima: thankoooooooo 😀
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No doubts you’ve played with words in an appropriate way.. but the feelings behind each line makes me think about it even when m alone in ma kitchen cooking, working at ma off… or sittin.. thinking… or sad..it makes me feel nice each time ..after reading your piece of work.. that is so close to me n actually so many ppl who read you..:) 🙂 I will not say it’s a nice work… it’s really awesome…:)
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@shiviee: aww this is such a sweet comment from you..I always wish it just keeps you happy 🙂
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too awesome to comment on 🙂
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AD: yayyyy so nice to see you here 🙂 … sweet compliment..thankoo
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the pain comes through…and you certainly have the gift…for being able to pen it down just so.. 🙂
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!:)
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indyeah: this place has been graced by your visit :). merry xmas and a happy new year
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Inspiring
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Pesto Sauce: thank you 🙂
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i absolutely love it!!
i am sucker for good photos and the words just add to it!
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@shraddha: patiently waited for you to see it..i dunno if you saw the previous post..thanks for your comment 😀
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loved it before and love it now:) but right now there are a lot of emotions churning inside after reading that other creation of yours…..
what have you written Ani?
let the words sink in first coz they touched something inside and then I will write…
just sighing right now…
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@Indyeah: you made my day with your comments 🙂 simply loved it. I think what you wrote in comment is better than what i wrote in post. you seem to carry your heart in your words 😀
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simple and sweet 🙂
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@sanyukta: so sweet to see you here 🙂 how are you now..hope better
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Magical. Sensitive. Sweet. And so cool!
I could go on. But I think I have made my point. So I will stop. You please carry on. Make our days brighter with such posts. K. I will stop now. 🙂
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@choco: aww soo soo sweet your comment 🙂 i will try my best choco.
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PS: Why am I a blue dice on your blog? How can I get my bug eyed face here?
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@choco: how did you get it in first place? may be you should try and upload it once again on gravtar?
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