aniruddha pathak

Letting go

In poetry on December 17, 2009 at 08:01

Painting Β toe nails
Tying up hair
Carrying you to bed
I thought i cared

Puckered lips
Mascara kissed eyes
Tease me to the hilt
Each night surprise

And now i miss
the feathered slap
the gentle nudge
the body wrap

Dying in moments
Makes it hard you know
I hope, I End
Before letting go

P.S: This poem was inspired by the photograph posted by my blog friend and amazing photographer Daniel. Show him some love πŸ™‚

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  1. simple yet touching use of expression πŸ™‚

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  2. That’s just beautiful…amazing work Ani! Love how you evoke such vivid images!

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  3. Another cute one.. keep going!

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  4. you are definitely living up to your blog’s name aren’t you πŸ™‚ loved those lines. and loved the pic too.
    Both of you, take a bow πŸ™‚

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  5. That was a magical posts πŸ˜€ You beautifully drew a picture before my eyes through your picturesque words.

    Fantastic picture and an awesome post.

    Keep up the good work buddy πŸ˜€

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  6. Wow is that a clicked picture? Phew. Of course, lovely like always. A little sad, but sadness has so much beauty no? Someone feels all mushy these days, kya baat hai! You say its out of imagination but some inspiration has got to be there na!

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  7. apt image and wonderful words to describe it πŸ™‚

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  8. Nice che! I m actually pleasntly surprised..u write decent poems bebu!

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  9. Ahh you churn out gem after gem. Itna dard?

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  10. are u sure it’s only the piture that inspired u….or is there a morw personal connection wid all the mush u’ve been throwing at us? πŸ˜‰

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  11. Charming, indeed! You should be a cook… you’re most adept at churning out just the right recipes. πŸ™‚

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  12. Almost stumbled upon your blog!! And now can’t help being glad! Its beautiful.

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  13. @shilpadesh: πŸ˜› thank you

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  14. WOW Anirudh, that was wonderful….try your hand more on the poems, I am sure you would go go far….

    I am impressed..

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  15. That was so beautiful.. :)..Amazing pics and poetry…

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  16. Beautiful! Lovely poem and images!

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  17. @atrisa: hehe aisa bola na to pakka one for you coming up soon πŸ˜€

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  18. @megha:hehe sorry first time me hi galti πŸ˜€

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  19. hey man its lovely! merry christmas!

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  20. hey Ani, very lovely piece…your words paint the whole picture….and very nice photography too! cheers

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  21. lovely expressions
    wish i could write like this

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  22. Very well done Sir. Loved it. πŸ™‚

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  23. @BM: Do you see a check box that i you must have ticked to track comments on my post.There is no such check box on your posts πŸ™‚

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  24. I love the title…you are inspiring me to try my hand at poetry now…may be will try something sooner or later.
    Amazing words, amazing photo. Simply loved it.

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  25. Its not so easy to let go…

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  26. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWESOME! LOVED it! Poem snap both…

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  27. No doubts you’ve played with words in an appropriate way.. but the feelings behind each line makes me think about it even when m alone in ma kitchen cooking, working at ma off… or sittin.. thinking… or sad..it makes me feel nice each time ..after reading your piece of work.. that is so close to me n actually so many ppl who read you..:) πŸ™‚ I will not say it’s a nice work… it’s really awesome…:)

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  28. too awesome to comment on πŸ™‚

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  29. the pain comes through…and you certainly have the gift…for being able to pen it down just so.. πŸ™‚
    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!:)

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  30. i absolutely love it!!

    i am sucker for good photos and the words just add to it!

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  31. loved it before and love it now:) but right now there are a lot of emotions churning inside after reading that other creation of yours…..
    https://silentlyexpress.wordpress.com/2009/12/13/how-do-i-leave/

    what have you written Ani?
    let the words sink in first coz they touched something inside and then I will write…

    just sighing right now…

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    • @Indyeah: you made my day with your comments πŸ™‚ simply loved it. I think what you wrote in comment is better than what i wrote in post. you seem to carry your heart in your words πŸ˜€

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  32. simple and sweet πŸ™‚

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  33. Magical. Sensitive. Sweet. And so cool!
    I could go on. But I think I have made my point. So I will stop. You please carry on. Make our days brighter with such posts. K. I will stop now. πŸ™‚

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  34. PS: Why am I a blue dice on your blog? How can I get my bug eyed face here?

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