How he loved to wake up at night and admire her sleep.
She looked beautiful, like an angel in her white gown.
The moonlight cast a beautiful shadow on her face.
Why didn’t she understand that now they could afford to have a child?
He wiped the knife clean and decided to call police.
Silent Expressions 
uiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii………………..no no…..cldnt hve been so cruel…a bit kind approach wld hve lft me with a smile..:)
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oh my god 😛 that was really quick 😀
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That was evil 😦
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uhh i think people are missing two sides shilpadesh here 🙂
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Why would he kill her over something like that? What gave you this idea? There’s opemthing really wrong here!! (or maybe, as a nice literature student…. I’d give in to willing suspension of disbelief and agree that what happened was the right thing to do… as long as she’s dead and doesn’t return to take revenge :P)
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hehe kriti out of rage people can go insane :)…i don’t think he really wanted to kill her, he would not have called the police himself
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i meant.. something*
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got that kriti 🙂
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gosh thats brutal.. the reason seems absurd but then the guy could be a psycho and just needed an excuse to use that knife on his wife..
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uh really aria?
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cruel cruel :-(…why did it have to end this way? 😀
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even i did not like the end titaxy, rage is not good
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Well from what I heard, Brad Pitt left Aniston cuz of the same reason (apart from falling for the Jolie charm), didn’t kill her though 😐 What a psychopath your little character!
Damn Ani, destructive mind. Tsk tsk! 😛
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hehe aaah atrisa has some examples too…thanks :)..and yea return had to be something different..had too many mushy posts 😛
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*12 mulkon ki police tumhe dhoondh rahi hai, AP* 😀
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I am already under Don Solilos protection..i have signed the law of Omerta 😉
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lol..i LOVED it!!
you have my kind of imagination!!! lol!!
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hahaha hi5 shradha 😛
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What! he killed her just because they could not afford the chiild? what the hell..
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read again prachi….he said he can afford the child 🙂
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Haww! And the title made me think it would be a love story 😐
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hehe 😛 maza aaya neha 😀
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SHEESH- that was very unkind- NO No happy endings please.
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sakshi you mean you need happy endings or you dont need happy endings 😛
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oh sorry missed it:D but nonethe less he is a pshycho! killed his wife just because she did not want a baby..finished a life just because she did not want to give birth to another life?
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hehe i wish it was that simple bebu 🙂
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Ooooh! That was scary!
Very very chilling – but beautifully executed 55er 🙂
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thank yew smitha..glad you liked it 🙂
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a bloody come back eh 😀 just watched a Kill Bill vol1 scene and this one didn’t help 😛
glad you are back though.. promise us you’ll write a happy one next time 😉
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😉 yea literally a bloddy come back..i dont know just a thought came to my mind and ended up blogging it here shruthi…promise a happy post soon 😀
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omg!! what an ending!!
thats a complete about-turn from the kind of stories u usually write!
good change 🙂 i liked it.
so finally revealing ur true colours eh? experimenting with darkness n all 😉
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thanks ashi glad you liked it :)…about the dark side..i think we all have one..just that this thought kept bothering me today and i ended up putting it here 😀
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the thot of what? ppl killing for love?
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@Ashwathy noooo the whole story 😀
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ok… interesting…
let the ideas out one by one… dont limit urself to mush all the time 🙂 ur imagination as a writer has potential…
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thank you ashwathy 🙂
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Ooh…talk about morbid! 🙂 Well wriiten though…very visual…
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thanks much PB 🙂
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whoa! The tennis elbow gone now?
Better killing her than raping her for the child!
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aww meira i think you got it wrong..there is no indication of rape here 🙂
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:O
..and u’r back witha bang!
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hehe thanku oRange* credits to people like you to make an early come back
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Oh, wow… I definitely didn’t expect that ending! This was chilling in its starkness. Well done!
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thanks april belle..you are generous 🙂
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Wo..ow!
I have only one word … ‘awesome!’
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thanks tangerine 🙂
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Gosh that was such a gruesome end!!
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hehe you bet ria 🙂
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! 🙂 u are getting better and better , isn’t it ??
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aah thanks adisha you are generous 🙂
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Psycho write-ups are always interesting…so was this one..
good writing…
but bichari la ka maarla 😦
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hehe asach words sample na megha 😛
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hehe…sadly adoption is not thought as an option by many …
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and hows you tennis
elbow ?
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tennis elbow bara aahe ata…thanks megha 🙂
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whoa!!! what psychotic thoughts..keep them away ani_aset , shook me up have to tell you though..why dont you write a 55 er on dancing..some fiasco maybe
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hehe nice idea sujata..will write one 🙂
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@megha i think you are right there 🙂
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Wasn’t that too trivial a reason to have done something like that? Nice but spooky!
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they cud afford a child the lady didn want it..he killed in rage 🙂
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oh that’s brutal!
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yea daniel 😉
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hey…welcome back…good to know you’re feeling better 🙂
yeah, everyone has a dark side…wish everyone would limit to the pen like you…
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hehe its not my dark side ES :D,..thanks for the wishes you guys sent
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A bit dark but quite real 🙂
tnxx for the encouragement in my blog!
TC
Keshii.
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hey keshiii glad to see you back 🙂 …waiting for you to post soon
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You have been awarded!
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oh wow thank yew shilpadesh 🙂
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The perfect concluding line – brief, direct and jolting.
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hello mikimbizii 🙂 welcome to the blog..and thanks for the lovely comment 😀
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After a long time I am here. it went out of my mind after I read your post of you taking a break.
why he had to do something for such a small thing. talking helps isnt it.that was a cruel..if he loved her so much.
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i know…rage can be bad manisha..and welcome back to the blog 😀
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WOW! This was soooooo evil!! I Loved It :D! and decided to follow you provided you continue such posts 😉
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WOW! This was soooooo evil!! I Loved It :D! and will blog roll you, provided you continue such posts 😉
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hehe thanks purnima…welcome to the blog..and thanks for the blog roll :)..i will try my best
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wy aint ur blog link working purnima?
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he he he ok now it shud work!!! There was a typo error. 😀
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thank you 🙂
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you slit my heart! OUCH!
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Aww AD i would never do that 🙂
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Oooo that was dark and evil!
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thanks jal pari 🙂 that was meant to be dark 😀
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ouch, that was dangerously in love. 😛
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hehe nice na freya darkk tried one just like you did once 😀
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Ow wow! Did not see that coming! Dark and troubling…But so well written!
Blog hopped here and loved your 55 word series 🙂
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welcome to the blog ashley 😛 this was my first attempt at dark 55er 🙂
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this was spooky.. can someone do this just to have a child… scary….
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hey soulmate this is actually about so many emotions..its not just about child..its about why the woman does not want it?…why the guy wants it so more? ..why rage?
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Whoa…evil story 😛
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hehe thanks shanu 😉
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