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55 words or less: Temptation

In 55 words or less on August 18, 2009 at 07:00

Her eyes, he could spend days admiring just her eyes.

The sea breeze gently caressed her face, as she tried to adjust her hair.

There was something more he was admiring that moment, and he wished his love would grant him his wish.

 “Rahul, can you please eat the second Samosa, I’m full”

Rahul smiled.

  1. lol! I would to that for a samosa.

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    Meira 18 August 2009 at 7am

  2. lolz 🙂

    I love samosa too 😀
    but this is too good 🙂

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    Richa 18 August 2009 at 8am

  3. i hate samosas and if my bf would qdmire the samosa more than me, i’d smash the fucking samosa on his face 😀

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    oRange* 18 August 2009 at 8am

  4. haha..
    we get good samosas in our canteen..:P

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    prachi 18 August 2009 at 9am

  5. heheh too cute 😀

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    Ashwathy 18 August 2009 at 10am

  6. that was funny, very unexpected. first time on your blog, liking the 55 word concept. very interesting.

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    sujata 18 August 2009 at 1pm

  7. This line is absolutely fantastic “There was something more he was admiring that moment, and he wished his love would grant him his wish.” Well played my friend. Well played.

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    missy. 18 August 2009 at 2pm

  8. Could you elaborate the wish 😉

    Well I like Wada Pav 🙂

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    Megha 18 August 2009 at 3pm

  9. lol! i love smaosa too!

    thanks for visitng our blog..do update our info…we are hosting our own domain now…just follow the link of the comment..

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    shraddha@theselfloveproject 18 August 2009 at 4pm

  10. how do u always manage to write so well!!

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    Ria 18 August 2009 at 5pm

  11. :P…No fair…I was reminded of a certain romantic scene in Kaminey and turned out it was just a tale of a famosa! 😦

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    choco 18 August 2009 at 6pm

  12. hahahah.. googly that was. misleading title and all. good one 😀 unfortunately we don’t get good samosas’ here in Bangalore. I remember eating yummy one’s in Delhi.
    I almost missed reading this post of yours, so me blog rolling you; can avoid such catastrophe in the future 😉

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    Shruthi 18 August 2009 at 7pm

  13. Oooo !!! thats lovely ……wen i was in college we used to hve word with the canteen service provider for samoosa’s ……

    joliiieess:-)

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    Escapist 18 August 2009 at 8pm

  14. gud 1…..:)

    take care..

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    dreaming eyes 19 August 2009 at 2pm

  15. ummm. now I want to have samosa.. good one..

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    Manisha 20 August 2009 at 5am

  16. NIrulas samosas is awesome!

    But the one that will stay at the TOP of my list is this punjabi uncle, who had a stall at the corner of our street, and after school i would always ALWAYS go there to buy samosas and vada pav! You see how healthy I ate as a kid? 😛

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    Miss M 20 August 2009 at 9am

  17. Nice!! I really liked your 55ers…!!!

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    Sakshi 20 August 2009 at 12pm

  18. Nice place you have here. And very nice piece of writings too…
    And i like Red and Black Blogs.. 😉

    Thanks for dropping by at my weblog….

    Regards,
    Ashen

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    Ashenglow 20 August 2009 at 12pm

  19. No way I am going to share my samosas with anybody, even with my boy friend/husband.
    I would rather refrigerate it and it it later when I am no longer so full.

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    aparna 21 August 2009 at 4am

    • heheh aparna thats the kind of samosa fan i am too 😛
      My mom makes lovely samosas which i pack and bring back to mumbai everytime i visit delhi. Keep them in fridge and eat 😛

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      aniruddha pathak 21 August 2009 at 5am

  20. That was funny. And now I am hungry.

    P.s. I love this 55 words concept. Unlike my never ending ramblings :). Keep penning.

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    jal pari 21 August 2009 at 7am

  21. I had tried these 55 words tidbits to cure my verbosity. They helped for a while but I am back being the same. You write really cool stuff .. good one!

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    Aria 21 August 2009 at 10am

  22. LOL! That was just brilliant. I did not see that coming! At all 🙂

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    Pal 21 August 2009 at 12pm

  23. Lol.. amazing twist.. hehe.. I guess like most Indians I too just loooooooooveeee samosa.. 😛

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    preposterousgirl 21 August 2009 at 1pm

  24. well written ! expected something romantic….but i had to smile at the ending

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    aparna 22 August 2009 at 12pm

  25. first time here…LOL…great sense of humor….
    looking fwd to reading the others…there goes the rest of my evening….

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    es 26 August 2009 at 8am

  26. a nice piece of work 🙂

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    meeta 5 February 2010 at 10am

  27. Nothing can separate me from my sams too. Good one!!

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    Mahak 5 February 2010 at 10am

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