aniruddha pathak

55 words or less: Temptation

In 55 words or less on August 18, 2009 at 07:00

Her eyes, he could spend days admiring just her eyes.

The sea breeze gently caressed her face, as she tried to adjust her hair.

There was something more he was admiring that moment, and he wished his love would grant him his wish.

 “Rahul, can you please eat the second Samosa, I’m full”

Rahul smiled.

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  1. lol! I would to that for a samosa.

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  2. lolz 🙂

    I love samosa too 😀
    but this is too good 🙂

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  3. i hate samosas and if my bf would qdmire the samosa more than me, i’d smash the fucking samosa on his face 😀

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  4. haha..
    we get good samosas in our canteen..:P

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  5. heheh too cute 😀

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  6. that was funny, very unexpected. first time on your blog, liking the 55 word concept. very interesting.

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  7. This line is absolutely fantastic “There was something more he was admiring that moment, and he wished his love would grant him his wish.” Well played my friend. Well played.

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  8. Could you elaborate the wish 😉

    Well I like Wada Pav 🙂

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  9. lol! i love smaosa too!

    thanks for visitng our blog..do update our info…we are hosting our own domain now…just follow the link of the comment..

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  10. how do u always manage to write so well!!

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  11. :P…No fair…I was reminded of a certain romantic scene in Kaminey and turned out it was just a tale of a famosa! 😦

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  12. hahahah.. googly that was. misleading title and all. good one 😀 unfortunately we don’t get good samosas’ here in Bangalore. I remember eating yummy one’s in Delhi.
    I almost missed reading this post of yours, so me blog rolling you; can avoid such catastrophe in the future 😉

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  13. Oooo !!! thats lovely ……wen i was in college we used to hve word with the canteen service provider for samoosa’s ……

    joliiieess:-)

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  14. gud 1…..:)

    take care..

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  15. ummm. now I want to have samosa.. good one..

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  16. NIrulas samosas is awesome!

    But the one that will stay at the TOP of my list is this punjabi uncle, who had a stall at the corner of our street, and after school i would always ALWAYS go there to buy samosas and vada pav! You see how healthy I ate as a kid? 😛

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  17. Nice!! I really liked your 55ers…!!!

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  18. Nice place you have here. And very nice piece of writings too…
    And i like Red and Black Blogs.. 😉

    Thanks for dropping by at my weblog….

    Regards,
    Ashen

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  19. No way I am going to share my samosas with anybody, even with my boy friend/husband.
    I would rather refrigerate it and it it later when I am no longer so full.

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    • heheh aparna thats the kind of samosa fan i am too 😛
      My mom makes lovely samosas which i pack and bring back to mumbai everytime i visit delhi. Keep them in fridge and eat 😛

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  20. That was funny. And now I am hungry.

    P.s. I love this 55 words concept. Unlike my never ending ramblings :). Keep penning.

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  21. I had tried these 55 words tidbits to cure my verbosity. They helped for a while but I am back being the same. You write really cool stuff .. good one!

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  22. LOL! That was just brilliant. I did not see that coming! At all 🙂

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  23. Lol.. amazing twist.. hehe.. I guess like most Indians I too just loooooooooveeee samosa.. 😛

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  24. well written ! expected something romantic….but i had to smile at the ending

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  25. first time here…LOL…great sense of humor….
    looking fwd to reading the others…there goes the rest of my evening….

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  26. a nice piece of work 🙂

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  27. Nothing can separate me from my sams too. Good one!!

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