He paused.
She came, dressed up in that lovely white tee.
“Bebe” it said.
Big glares were hiding the lovely eyes.
The tic-tac sound of her stilettos, created the most soothing music.
There was one more thing competing for her attention as she raced past him.
“The train arriving on platform 1 is fast local”
Silent Expressions 
This is about you, isnt it! Come on admit it! Hehe 😉
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No comments Miss M 😀
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Knew it! 😉
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So what happened to him? 😛
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Why worried about him Solilo 🙂 ? admire the girl running in those stilettos 😀
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i think it was the stilettos that clinched the deal..
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Hehe it was the complete look shraddha, not just stilettos 😛
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I hope they meet again 🙂
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Aww that was a sweet one shruthi 😀
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Stilettos and soothing sound? If only they were equally soothing (and comfortable ) to wear! SIgh!
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Uhh they are not? I thought they were Meira 😦
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heheh 😀 loved this one!
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Thanks Ash 🙂
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hello..u and ur 55 words…short sweet and simple..and always bring smile on my face…
keep writing..
take care.. 🙂
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Ahan if it brings a smile..then i’m happy dreaming eyes 🙂
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Stilettos and running to catch a train? Bad combination. But the shoes look so darn sexy.*Sigh*
So did she get into the train or do we wait for a Jab We Met scene?*
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hai aparna..you are worried about her getting into train…what about the guy 😦
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you are very good in this 🙂
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hehe thanks daniel
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Lolzz… This was a Really good one , even though I had to read it twice .. but the second time round I was giggling to myself … Do check out my story time blogs too 😀
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Will do adisha 🙂
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that was nice. 🙂
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thank yew ria 🙂
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Sheesh…can’t imaginge running in them!
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one more blog?? 🙂
Try once nikki 😉
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My first visit here (hopped over from Miss M’s) and I am certain I won’t be back in the near future. And why? because your blog was so addictive, that I read about 10 of your posts at one go! Therefore, I will have to re-charge myself before I visit again 🙂 Very nice blog .. keep going 🙂
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hey come back here Pal 😛
Welcome to the blog..that is one of the most sweet comment i received for my blog..cya around 😉
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Thank you! Was afraid you might misunderstand my comment. Glad you got the compliment bang on!!
– http://writerzblock.wordpress.com/
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@Pal: Thanks for the blog url finally 🙂
You should mention it in the URL in form each time..so its easier to keep track.
Cheers !!
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You are getting better and better! And Boy! look at the number of comments now..increasing day by day!
And btw, that guy shud’ve run behind her and told her that he has fallen in love with her and wants to get married to next in the mandir next to the station:D kitna maza ata ladki ka exxpression dekh ke! hehehe
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hehe thanks bebu…>:D<
that would not be the best thing to do i guess 🙂
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Nice one:-) cant catch up with all the posts due to lot of work aroud. but still try to make a point to read it…the 55 words is too good and u r getting better everyday.
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No worries manisha..i’m glad you like it..your comments are very nice motivation to keep writing 🙂
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good one… but if they make a soothing sound , m not sure…. maybe to men they do…
PS-regarding comments on my blog, i really dont know how…. whenevr i would know, i wud let u know…
tc
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hey gypsy..ya better find out soon..and yea the stilettos do make a soothing sound 🙂
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and your magic with words continues! 😀
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thanks neha 🙂
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I think that he thinks a lot…It is sweet that he is a thinker which can also mean that he is sensitive and diplomatic..But common now…Follow her..Get her number…Then think some more and come back and tell us all about it! 😀
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hehe choco this is just pure fiction 😉
I’ll try and see if i can make him ask for a phone number 😀
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Hey. nice one.
btw, I am sure this has happened to you or is it your vivid imagination, sapno ki raani ? 🙂
the twist in the end was good. thought they are parters first!!
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vivid imagination only megha 😛
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amazing…
u actually knw… woman quite well…or may b u just observe them well..lol
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hehe thanks sonal i’ll take that as a compliment 😛
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