aniruddha pathak

55 Words or less: School

In 55 words or less on August 6, 2009 at 05:37

He tried hiding it from his sister.

Something in his heart still said that she knew about it.

It was tough to hide it in school bus.

Just when he thought it was over, his mom asked her sister

“Sneha what’s wrong with your brother?”

“Nothing mom, Ria just tied rakhi to him, he’s upset”

  1. lol! So apt :))
    poor guy

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  2. oh no! hehehe .. really pity him.
    This reminds me of the guys from my school. I wonder how many of them went through this ordeal 😀

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  3. ouch!! i guess in that sense, rakhi was invented to torture innocent guys…
    and also a blessing for girls to avoid guys they dont like..!

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  4. Ha ha the biggest fear of all guys…but tell him to relax as I have seen sometimes girl marrying the guy they once or tied Rakhi to!

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  5. hahahahahahaha!!!
    AWWW!!!
    LMAO!
    bebu this is ur best one!!!
    I feel like hugging the poor child!!:D

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  6. So Very Cute !!! 🙂

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  7. Now that’s real funny something is telling me that it’s about your childhood, eh ??? LOL

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  8. does it remind u of sumthn big guy

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  9. maybe of a childhood swthrt who tried to tie the knot only of a different kind

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  10. LOL!
    Perfect story for raksha bandhan. Hehehe!

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  11. I love Rakhi, it is such a power tool for the girls. All you need is to carry a bunch of them to school/college and the boys run away. More effective than pepper spray.
    I though the 55 words month was over?

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  12. awww…sweet!!!

    i love the spirit of rakhi!

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  13. hahahah…lovely…same old story wid all kids frm centuries.. 🙂

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  14. ROFL!!! awww poor poor guy! 😀

    Rakhi nahin yeh new age instrument of torture hai 😀

    PS:-your 55ers are good 😀

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  15. hahaha poor guy!! Short and so sweet! =)

    Keep posting! Love it.

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  16. heyy..whr r u nwdayss??
    sweet post

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  17. The 55 words are back!!! Yay!!!
    Haha…A Rakhi post with a twist…:D

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  18. atleast he got connected sumway……..:)soo sweet!

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  19. wht’s the fun if it turns out too be the way we plan!

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  20. Haha, I remember the guys in my school used to hide in the washrooms till the girls finally gave it up!

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  21. @ifonlyi : what is there to be optimistic here :)? and on another thought..you have your own blog?

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  22. ooooh that was heart breaking!!! poor rahul, naam to suna hoga but yeh kya ho gaya!!!!! great 55 words or less story!!!!

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  23. hehehe.. this was funny.. poor guy… and his sister must be having fun at his expense..

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