aniruddha pathak

NaBloPoMo:Post 31:Control

In 55 words or less on July 31, 2009 at 17:55

It was a routine now.

She waited patiently for a chance.

He was concentrating deeply on the task ahead.

The sweat was tripping down his cheek.

He decided to take a sip, when he turned for a split second to reach for the bottle.

She pounced on the remote  and pressed “New Game”.

Mission achieved.

  1. man, u are getting good at this 😀
    these 55-ers are addictive!

    i’d say she’s a sore loser btw!


  2. blogrolled you 😀


  3. This was interesting!! 😛


  4. fuuny and not to oemotional this time:-)


  5. hehehehe
    this one was really nice!:D
    u r getting better n better..:)


  6. hahahahhahahha……”ghar ghar ki kahani”…. 😀

    good one


  7. I don’t get it! :S

    *hides face under her blanket*



  8. I am her! 😮
    How did you know???…. 😮 :p


  9. hahahha… this one is very cool!


  10. This was so fun… what a great lead up and unexpected ending. Loved it!

    –Thanks for visiting The Self Love Project!


  11. haha good one 😀 i liked your concept of 55 words. very interesting.

    btw, new to your blog and will come back for more 🙂


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