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NaBloPoMo:Post 22:55 words or less:Shadow dance

In Uncategorized on July 22, 2009 at 19:46

He hated late meetings as much as he feared walking past the morgue.

Today was different, Catherine had finally agreed.

The shadow kept dancing with his steps, and it was his only company.

Now he just had to cross the road and he would be home.

And then the shadow stopped dancing.

  1. Sorry Ani,

    First one here to post comment, but being a dim wit, an unintelligent soul that i am, and that i have seen the path to this blog, i dnt stop myself from coming everytime and just so i think i will ruin the fun by asking…..(if you only forgive…forget you will not, i know)…but is it that “He” died!!!! :P. šŸ˜›
    i mean, this appeared a bit vague to me…*Please forgive a Dim-Wit*..

    šŸ˜›

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    Priya 23 July 2009 at 4am

  3. aila..creepy

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    prachithecoolest 23 July 2009 at 10am

  4. sad.please write some happy posts:-) and ya even it took sometime to understand that he died.

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    Manisha 23 July 2009 at 12pm

  5. This is an example of your best work! Truly so!

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    Prasi 23 July 2009 at 12pm

  6. allo. thanks by stopping by.

    i noticed u have a way with less words.
    this one was well expressed, well told through a medium of shadow..

    tc

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    gypsy 23 July 2009 at 1pm

  7. Ooohh..loved this one!
    The shadow is still dancing you know…Just look inside the cemetery šŸ˜‰

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    Choco 23 July 2009 at 3pm

  8. So sad !!! nice one

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    adisha 23 July 2009 at 7pm

  9. that was nice! didn’t strike he died until i read the comments !

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    joshi daniel 23 July 2009 at 8pm

  10. Great one Ani… one of the best in the ones i ve gone through on your blog till now…

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    Pritesh 24 July 2009 at 6am

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