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NaBloPoMo:Post 20:55 Words or less: After Effects

In 55 words or less on July 20, 2009 at 19:03

It seemed like a perfect moment.

He had stopped himself many times before.

But, today was different; he would not hold it back for long.

Slowly he held her face in his hands and KISSED!!!

And then he felt like throwing up.

“Damn!! Bad breath,eeeeks”

“But I didn’t know you’ll kiss”

“Huh”

  1. iiikkksss…watt was that!!!! hahahahaha….

    neways, thanks for the comment and no, my college was not in mumbai… :)..waiting to see more of your writings..till then ..bye.. 🙂

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  2. ewwwwwwww!!!
    talk about illusions being shattered in a heartbeat!

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  3. bttr give a short notice next time……nice work!!

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  4. hahahahhahaha!
    I hhahahaha so hahaha hope hahahah this hahha never hahaha happens hahaha to haahaha anyone hhahahaha I ahhaahhah know.
    That would not be so funny 😀
    Nice blog 🙂

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  5. hahahahahaha!!
    omg..
    poor guy!!
    hehehe..

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  6. ROFL!!! This was like reading an Archies mag!!! 😀

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  7. Man.. ! Shocker !

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  8. hehehe.. I guess they forgot about cholrmint or colgate max fresh ads…

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  9. hahahaha….too good!
    ROFL!!!

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