You were the butterfly
happy to fly alone
came back with tired wings
Comfort and love galore
Wings have now revived
I loved your short stay
Once more heart will ache
When I see you fly away
aniruddha pathak
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wow nice…..loved it
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hey thanks ananya :)…i’m always happy to see comments from you..if you have posted recently i will be commenting soon..just too tied up
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is this my award?…………thanks dear am honored but nuthn goin on in my mind ryt nw…….:(
writers block i suppose
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nice and sweet.. and oddly exhilerating. 🙂
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Thanks kriti 🙂
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beautifully written..
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thank you indyeah 😀
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I really dont know how people mange to write poems and that too gud ones. I know I can never write good poems. would you mind giving a crash course:-) this one was simple and sweet and I love butterflies:-)so all the more liked it. write something on stars sometimes. oh i think i m becoming demanding.but I am giving your creativity more thoughts u c..
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“this one was simple and sweet and I love butterflies:-)so all the more liked it”
Manisha you know the ideas and methods and you asking me 😀
Logic is simple, write what you feel like writing :P..
thanks for the inspiration..keep sending more 🙂
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Ah! The poet in you is really sprouting wings now! 🙂
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😛 thanks tuliiiip
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bebu! whats wrong?:S
*hugs*
temme whats wrong hun?:S
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nothing is wrong bebu :D, i am perfectly fine
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Such a beautiful piece… I thoroughly can relate to it ,,,, Thank u for writing this …
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Aww adisha..i thoroughly wish that no one relates to it :(…its not a nice feeling
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Owww…Such fatherly emotions 😛
Lovely lil’ poem though… 🙂
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Thankoo choco :D,…lovely lil comment though 😀
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PS: Whatever happened to my face here? It used to show earlier but now I seem to be some kind off colored blotchy design!!! 😥
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Aww i miss the cartoon too choco..may be you can try uploading in gravtaar again.
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I had not uploaded it the first time round but it still showed!
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wonderful….don’t ve many words,make me remind of broken wings by khalil gibran!!
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Thanks ifonlyi (very strange name..i make this comment after a long time :))
I have not read khalil gibran..would love to
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that is cool!
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Thanks daniel…when r u posting next?
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hey a very nice poem and the best part part is I can relate to it alot.
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Welcome to the blog tasneem..i surely do not wish that any one relates to this :(…feel sad about it
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Aww ananya i’m so sorry..i posted the award post..but somehow it did not get posted..try now 🙂
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