aniruddha pathak

NaBloPoMo:Post 15: Freedom

In poetry on July 15, 2009 at 17:06

You were the butterfly

happy to fly alone

came back with tired wings

Comfort and love galore


Wings have now revived

I loved your short stay

Once more heart will ache

When I see you fly away

  1. wow nice…..loved it


  2. nice and sweet.. and oddly exhilerating. 🙂


  3. beautifully written..


  4. I really dont know how people mange to write poems and that too gud ones. I know I can never write good poems. would you mind giving a crash course:-) this one was simple and sweet and I love butterflies:-)so all the more liked it. write something on stars sometimes. oh i think i m becoming demanding.but I am giving your creativity more thoughts u c..


    • “this one was simple and sweet and I love butterflies:-)so all the more liked it”
      Manisha you know the ideas and methods and you asking me 😀

      Logic is simple, write what you feel like writing :P..
      thanks for the inspiration..keep sending more 🙂


  5. Ah! The poet in you is really sprouting wings now! 🙂


  6. bebu! whats wrong?:S
    temme whats wrong hun?:S


  7. Such a beautiful piece… I thoroughly can relate to it ,,,, Thank u for writing this …


  8. Owww…Such fatherly emotions 😛

    Lovely lil’ poem though… 🙂


  9. PS: Whatever happened to my face here? It used to show earlier but now I seem to be some kind off colored blotchy design!!! 😥


  10. wonderful….don’t ve many words,make me remind of broken wings by khalil gibran!!


  11. hey a very nice poem and the best part part is I can relate to it alot.


  12. Aww ananya i’m so sorry..i posted the award post..but somehow it did not get posted..try now 🙂


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