aniruddha pathak

NaBloPoMo Post 3:55 words or less-Moment

In 55 words or less, story on July 3, 2009 at 18:29

Every second seemed like eternity.

As he scanned along her eyebrows into kohl kissed eyes, he was stunned!!!

It was his turn now.

Her smile meant the world to him. Scarlet lips were now going to speak.

“A Veg Mc Puff and French fries, anything else Sir??”

P.S: This post is dedicated to the sweet girl behind the counter of Mc Donalds, CP, Shivaji stadium,Delhi.

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  1. hehehehe..

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  2. lol.
    Good one.
    I like this one the best out of all three. 🙂

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    • Oh thats sweet..really mean it..i was not sure if one will ever get this one….its real 😛

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      • Haha. The act itself is not as special as the narration. I’m sure many people would’ve felt the same way about girls/guys on the other side of the counter, but it’s you who managed to capture the ‘moment’ in the best way possible! 🙂

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  3. I agree with the person above..You’ve really managed to capture the moments!
    Awesome 🙂

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  4. @kriti: Thankoooooooo 🙂

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  5. Lovely! too good!
    Was the guy you? 😛

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  6. hehe… do I sense a crush? 🙂

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