aniruddha pathak

NaBloPoMo:Post 11:Mumbai Rats

In 55 words or less, story on July 11, 2009 at 5:45 am

The stink was getting unbearable.

That struggle to find his space in this world.

He could feel something trickle down his spine.

A pack of rats, that moved in perfectly synchronized motion.

What wrong had he done to be in this mess?

If only he had listened to Riya.

“Never miss the 9:28 am local”

  1. Eeuwww…Rofl!!!

    This was disgustingly awesome! :D

  2. This is horrifying!! trains in India are like that… :(

  3. Haha ew. Though I haven’t quite experienced that in Bombay, I have experienced rush hour elsewhere – - and they’re all pretty similar. I’d rather get home one hour later, or leave earlier just to avoid rush-hour travel, lol.

  4. super cool :) enjoyed reading it.

    thanx for ur visit :)

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    :D
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  6. Yuck! Tell me bout it!